Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Coruscant underworld police

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Coruscant underworld police

—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 07:14, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:22, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
The placement of that image is a little bothersome, but good work. Cade Calrayn 20:08, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
They remind me of the Helghast from the Killzone series :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:48, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
Pending others' satisfaction. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:00, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:26, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 20:07, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
Winterz (talk) 03:34, March 26, 2013 (UTC)

~~History: Around 20 BBY… Could you give the proper reference for this date?~~
- I think that should be the correct source.
  - For future reference, Darth Maul—Death Sentence 1 is the proper source for the majority of Season 5.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 07:08, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
    - Good, cause that's what I listed. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 07:10, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
      - Bah, my apologies. Didn't catch that, good work.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 07:14, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
A little later, two police officers on Level 1315 spotted an explosion at a warehouse and gave an alert to Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker, Jedi Master Plo Koon and clone shock troopers with the Coruscant Guard who responded and were able to capture Tano at the warehouse. Please split up.
- Done.
Not bad. Keep it up.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 06:58, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks!
One other thing, from the intro… Coruscant underworld police were police officers of the Coruscant Security Force assigned specifically to police the underworld of the planet Coruscant. Could you vary your usage of the word police?—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 07:01, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 07:04, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

~~"the many dangers of the underworld." Such as?~~ IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:42, March 8, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 04:19, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

~~Please be more specific on Darth Maul's comic reference, establishing the reasons for the said date.~~
- Well, the reason is this: Forum:SH:TCW_Timeline_2012#Shadow_Conspiracy. Is that what you were asking for?
  - I know the reason, I just wanted you to be more specific in the article's ref. Winterz (talk) 14:00, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
    - I'm confused, I'm not sure how I can be more specific. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 18:43, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
      - ~~You can say that the comics established the corresponding in-universe year for that 5th season of the show ;).~~ Winterz (talk) 19:40, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
        Ah, got it. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 03:20, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
~~Correct the Eras ;).~~ Winterz (talk) 01:48, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
- Nice catch. :) Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 03:39, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

~~First thing - I moved the image to stop it disrupting the flow of the header.~~
- Ok.
~~Underworld police officers wore heavy leather and metal armor with mechanical eye,~~ - are you missing a few words after "eye" here? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:42, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
- Yep, done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 03:41, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

~~The BTS should note that the Encyclopedia was the first source to identify these police officers by name.~~ Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:04, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 18:43, March 25, 2013 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:34, March 26, 2013 (UTC)