Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Corinna A'Daasha

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Corinna A'Daasha

• Nominated by: HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) (talk!) 16:36, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Women

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:12, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
2. very impressive work for a first GAN! BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:27, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:00, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
4. Nice! Herasoars (talk) 20:12, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
5. Looking forward to more! JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:15, 12 January 2023 (UTC)
6. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:10, 15 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• Good work! Just a few things I noticed:
  • Article should mention that she's a Corellian.
    • intro and body both mention she was born on Corellia, does that not make her a Corellian? i am genuinely asking, i can add it if necessary!! HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) (talk!) 23:14, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
      • Some examples: Jez (Human), Hoclaw, Tula, Anandra Milon. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:24, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
        • Added to the infobox and in the article's body (in bio) ! HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) (talk!) 15:51, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
          • One small oddity: If they were "born" on Corellia then the "birth" field of the infobox should be filled out. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:01, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
            • Sadly, source doesn't provide a birth date/year but still explicitly uses "born" and states it was on Corellia, so i fear that filling out the Born field with this might be unnecessary as the homeworld field already states Corellia. HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) (talk!) 16:42, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
              • The field can still be filled out regardless. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:40, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
                • Added! HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) (talk!) 20:39, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Context for Cohden K'Reye. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:59, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
    • added some, is this enough?HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) (talk!) 23:14, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
      • Good enough. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:24, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

• This currently implies that the sound and light displays were successful instead of the club - guessing that's not accurate: "The twins established the Glow Dome, a nightclub featuring elaborate sound and light displays that became extremely successful."
  • How is this? HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) (talk!) 10:25, 11 January 2023 (UTC)
• Can you use a better word than "good" here? "good abilities in running, dodging..." JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:34, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Reworded per discord conversation, tell me what you think! HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) (talk!) 15:18, 11 January 2023 (UTC)

Braha

• Intro opts to call her by her last name after the namedrops of her and her sister. But the body primarily goes for a first name basis. I would like to suggest switching the instance in the intro, since the first name basis is good for telling apart the sisters. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 00:01, 11 January 2023 (UTC)
  • changed! HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) (talk!) 10:25, 11 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:10, 15 January 2023 (UTC)