Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Coovern

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Coovern

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Support

  1. RattsT (talk) 02:04, July 6, 2020 (UTC)
  2. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:08, July 6, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:45, July 16, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 09:57, July 20, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:51, July 20, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Erebus
  • Pipelink the second inclusion of "Empire" in both the introductory and the main body paragraph to Politics as it is a form of government. CIS roundel Erebus Chronus Open frequency 18:34, June 27, 2020 (UTC)
Ratts
  • {{Circa}} should be used in the infobox.
    • c. has already been implemented by the reviewers for Puke and Kkkt. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 23:19, July 2, 2020 (UTC)
      • I see. This was in response to Shay's objection here. Not sure what to make of it then, unless the ECs and ACs go about this differently. RattsT (talk) 23:48, July 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • Is the last sentence of the intro really necessary? It reads a little clunky. RattsT (talk) 22:55, July 2, 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • You should provide the real reason for Coovern's death before the "official" reason, in order to keep it in chronological order. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 14:11, July 6, 2020 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Are we sure that Moff is consistently capitalized as a rank?
    • Tarkin does this consistently yes. Shadow Fall only shows it as the title of someone's name as far as I can find. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 22:17, July 16, 2020 (UTC)
      • More to the point is how Canon treats it overall, not just one or two books. You should determine this, as I know we de-capped it for another Canon article. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:47, July 16, 2020 (UTC)
        • Moff has been converted to lower case, it's clear that from the novels aside from Tarkin, including Rogue One, Aftermath Trology, Catalyst, Bloodline, Twilight Company and Inferno Squad (thanks to Lewisr for helping me get this together) that use moff aside from the name title that it's not capitalised. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 23:28, July 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • After finishing reading through the Bio, I really don't know what any of this has to do with Coovern: "Around 5 ABY, Major Soran Keize—who had since taken charge of the 204th after the eventual death of Nuress—held a meeting with Gablerone and the fighter wing's other squadron commanders. When briefly studying the Imperial captain during the meeting, the major still saw Gablerone as the man Coovern had sent to replace Nuress." This appears to merely reflect Keize's perception of Gaberlone, which really isn't related to Coovern at all. Unless you can somehow tie this more critically to Coovern, I'm going to have to call for its removal as irrelevant. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:42, July 16, 2020 (UTC)
    • Removed, word count at 264 (166 for History). Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 22:17, July 16, 2020 (UTC)
      • Why did you remove the character's gender in resolving this objection? You should also really be utilizing the edit summary feature, for all edits but particularly when you remove massive amounts of text such as this. I might not have needed to ask this question otherwise. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:47, July 16, 2020 (UTC)
        • “Soran had known Gablerone for many years and still thought of him as the man Moff Coovern had sent to replace Colonel Nuress as leader of Shadow Wing;” I had mistakebly related "the man" with Coovern prior and so changed it back after I saw the mistake. Apologies for the complication. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 23:02, July 16, 2020 (UTC)

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