Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Chiss Senate

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Chiss Senate

• Nominated by: Goodmind (talk) 10:19, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 09:13, 24 July 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 466 words (87 introduction, 274 body, 105 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 19:39, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:21, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 15:42, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
4. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 20:40, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
5. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:08, 24 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

Uber

• Missing table of contents.
  • Added --Goodmind (talk) 11:27, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
• Please follow the Layout Guide for organizations.
  • Fixed --Goodmind (talk) 11:27, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
• Organization is a carbon copy of the intro, please reword one of them entirely. I would also reduce that intro to begin with.
  • Reworded --Goodmind (talk) 10:33, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
• No mention in the audiobook? UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:30, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Audiobook skips this conversation --Goodmind (talk) 11:27, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

Anil

• (Reviewing note) Per the Layout Guide, only the year should be provided for novels in Behind the scenes.
  • ? That's only on magazine issues --Goodmind (talk) 09:20, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
    • Yes, because Anil already removed it in a copy-edit. That's why it's a review note and not an objection. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 09:23, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
• (Reviewing note) Per the Manual of Style, the bolded mention of the name of an article's subject at the beginning of the article's text should not be linked, so I have moved the link for Chiss/Legends to a subsequent mention.
• Does the Chiss Senate have its own entry in The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia? Because if it doesn't, {{CSWECite}} should be used in Sources. (You can read more about that here.) Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:05, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
  • It's only mentioned in the Csaplar entry --Goodmind (talk) 09:30, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
• Althought the Chiss Senate itself doesn't have any picture, I think you can add one or two images of relevant subjects (Ascendancy, Csilla, etc.) in the article body. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 10:20, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Done --Goodmind (talk) 14:50, 21 July 2023 (UTC)

Erebus

• Please include the magazine publisher in the BTS.
  • Done --Goodmind (talk) 20:05, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
• Can I ask if it's a legislative body or the legislative body? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 19:12, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
  • It's one of them, with Council of Families above it. --Goodmind (talk) 19:31, 22 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:12, 24 July 2023 (UTC)