Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Chiss Senate

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Contents

  • 1 Chiss Senate
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Uber
        • 1.1.2.2 Anil
        • 1.1.2.3 Erebus
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Chiss Senate

  • Nominated by: Goodmind (talk) 10:19, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 09:13, 24 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 466 words (87 introduction, 274 body, 105 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 19:39, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
  2. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:21, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 15:42, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
  4. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 20:40, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:08, 24 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

Uber
  • Missing table of contents.
    • Added --Goodmind (talk) 11:27, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Please follow the Layout Guide for organizations.
    • Fixed --Goodmind (talk) 11:27, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Organization is a carbon copy of the intro, please reword one of them entirely. I would also reduce that intro to begin with.
    • Reworded --Goodmind (talk) 10:33, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
  • No mention in the audiobook? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:30, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Audiobook skips this conversation --Goodmind (talk) 11:27, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • (Reviewing note) Per the Layout Guide, only the year should be provided for novels in Behind the scenes.
    • ? That's only on magazine issues --Goodmind (talk) 09:20, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
      • Yes, because Anil already removed it in a copy-edit. That's why it's a review note and not an objection. LucaRoR (Talk) 09:23, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
  • (Reviewing note) Per the Manual of Style, the bolded mention of the name of an article's subject at the beginning of the article's text should not be linked, so I have moved the link for Chiss/Legends to a subsequent mention.
  • Does the Chiss Senate have its own entry in The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia? Because if it doesn't, {{CSWECite}} should be used in Sources. (You can read more about that here.) TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:05, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
    • It's only mentioned in the Csaplar entry --Goodmind (talk) 09:30, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Althought the Chiss Senate itself doesn't have any picture, I think you can add one or two images of relevant subjects (Ascendancy, Csilla, etc.) in the article body. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 10:20, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
    • Done --Goodmind (talk) 14:50, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
Erebus
  • Please include the magazine publisher in the BTS.
    • Done --Goodmind (talk) 20:05, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Can I ask if it's a legislative body or the legislative body? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 19:12, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
    • It's one of them, with Council of Families above it. --Goodmind (talk) 19:31, 22 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:12, 24 July 2023 (UTC)