Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Charros IV

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Charros IV

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 01:20, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 07:15, 10 October 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 629 words (63 introduction, 421 body, 145 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:AST, WP:FFGAMES

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Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:42, 25 September 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 20:09, 2 October 2023 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 22:35, 9 October 2023 (UTC)
4. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:15, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• Star Wars: Build the Millennium Falcon 60 Guide to the Galaxy: Umbara — Shadow World identifies the route Umbara is depicted to lie on as the Great Kashyyyk Branch, and it'd be reasonable to (approximately) linearily extend that route through Kashyyyk all the way to Charros, same as it was in Legends. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:11, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Very well, sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:40, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
• Just want to confirm: do sources really use the lowercase form of "cathedral factories" as well? (Because if they don't I don't think we should be using it either.)
  • AEYNTK uses lowercase.
• "The Xi Char believed in bespoke manufacturing,[11] and ultra-precision manufacturing was a religious act of worship at the factories" — any chance we can get the repeated usage of "manufacturing" here reworded?
  • Sorted.
• I feel like the last two sentences of Inhabitants can be safely cut. Those would be far more at home on the Xi Char's article, plus that list of Xi Char products risks forever being prone to becoming arbitrarily out-of-date with no real added value to show for it. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:51, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
  • I can agree on the last sentence, but I think the part about insectoid designs being common for Xi Charrians, which are known to be knocking about on Charros IV, is relevant. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:59, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Lew

• Xi Charrians could use some context in the intro
  • Done.
• Would it be worth including Xi Charrians in the otherspecies field of the infobox? Lewisr (talk) 23:23, 18 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Tad iffy on this one, as I don't want to class them as immigrated in case they are native like they are in Legends. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 20:20, 24 September 2023 (UTC)
    • I thought the same, though I also think until it is confirmed there's no harm in adding them to that field since they can still be found there Lewisr (talk) 21:39, 24 September 2023 (UTC)
      • Added for now. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:00, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Anil

• Per precedent, is it possible to replace the Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know and Star Wars: Complete Vehicles (2018) citations with their updated editions?
  • Second Complete Vehicles doesn't mention Charros so per precedent on using less unique references, I have chosen this approach.
• If the sources also use the preposition "on" for the planet, could you please document its class as terrestrial? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:14, 19 September 2023 (UTC)
  • My mistake, fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 20:20, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• Leaving a holding objection concerning the Starcruiser update thing that a buncha pages needed, seemingly including this one, so that it doesn't pass without it.—spookywilloww^talk 17:53, 2 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:59, 2 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:15, 10 October 2023 (UTC)