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Ceasar
- Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 22:19, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Fixed what got it removed from status a few years ago. Let's see what else is wrong with this bad boy
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Support
Nom more of the Marvel SW stuff you've written up! :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:33, 22 November 2021 (UTC)- Check out my copy-edit to make sure I didn't break anything. Nice work! MasterFred
(talk) 00:50, 30 January 2022 (UTC) - DFaceG (talk) 19:45, 7 February 2022 (UTC)
- Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 22:56, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
- LucaRoR
(Talk) 18:51, 9 February 2022 (UTC) - UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:51, 10 February 2022 (UTC)
Object
Macaroni
Intro & paragraph #2 in bio could use a split.- I'd say you can create a category for watchbeasts.
- As high quality as Cull's scans are, they should honestly be digitized.
- Missing a P+T section, where info on skin color would be better suited.
Comic requires full release date.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:38, 18 October 2021 (UTC)It would be better for the subsections to be two or three paragraphs each instead of one and four.- Definitely room for at least one more image.
- Is Bazarre supposed to be italicized? Its page makes it seem that way.
Context on Bazarre in the bio.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:09, 29 October 2021 (UTC)As great as the bts quote is, I don't think it's necessary.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:08, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Another image for "Skirmish on Patch-4"?UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:14, 30 November 2021 (UTC)Our page on the comic credits two writers, while this article only names one.UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:16, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Since "expansions" is more specific than the "rule" of the Empire, I'm going to count that as intro-exclusive information.UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:41, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
- Changed the wording in the body to match the intro. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:46, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
Fan
That luke quote is clearly a reference to " I come to bury Caesar, not to praise him." from Shakespeare's play. Would you think that's relevant BtS info?Fan26 (Talk) 06:23, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
Luca
Any reason why the reference is formatted differently from the appearance?LucaRoR (Talk) 08:34, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
In the BTS, you reference the Shakespeare's quote to the comic, which I don't think is accurate.LucaRoR (Talk) 09:16, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
- Added a new reference. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:46, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
Probably need to mention that it picked Lando up prior to saying that it dropped him. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 12 January 2022 (UTC)- Right now it says "was able to catch the Rebel on his front pincers" - is that not enough? That reads like he picked him up to me. IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:48, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
- It could just be that it grabbed him without lifting him up. One could say that football players chase and catch each other, without them lifting each other up. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:15, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
- Since this objection is now ten days old I've gone ahead and reworded the sentence to prevent the nomination from being removed. Hope that's alright. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:58, 7 February 2022 (UTC)
- It could just be that it grabbed him without lifting him up. One could say that football players chase and catch each other, without them lifting each other up. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:15, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
- Right now it says "was able to catch the Rebel on his front pincers" - is that not enough? That reads like he picked him up to me. IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:48, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
A few things mentioned in the intro aren't in the article body: Male; that he was put there to guard Ferret's stuff and allowed to run wild in Ferret's absence. It also reads as if Ferret WANTED Ceasar to kill lando and luke, whilst the article indicates this was purely because of Ceasar's aggressive nature. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 12 January 2022 (UTC)Did the rebels have Ferret's blessing to be there, this is unclear and provides context on why Ferret isn't there but they have his shuttle. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 12 January 2022 (UTC)Can we add the Males category? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:51, 10 February 2022 (UTC)