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Cassander sector
- Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 22:24, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: First GAN.
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Support
Imperators II(Talk) 14:34, 13 May 2021 (UTC)- I'm just going to pretend like I'm not jealous at how fast Imp reviewed :P JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 20:11, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
- Let me just reiterate that I've been expecting this nom for a long time. :P Imperators II(Talk) 21:48, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
- Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:27, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- We need more of these. UberSoldat93
(talk) 11:05, 12 June 2021 (UTC) - Tommy-Macaroni 12:24, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
Object
Erebus
- Welcome to the GAN, Ruiz! First off, there are a few things I've noticed in the article so far:
In the first sentence of the second History paragraph, I believe you could put the part of the First Order being a successor to the Empire in between em dashes.- Added
Reading over History, it would be worth sub-sectioning some of the information, preferably around the third paragraph.Erebus Chronus (Talk) 04:20, 9 May 2021 (UTC)- Subsections created--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 04:40, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
Per Erebus, good to see you here on the GAN.
I'm not convinced that the last sentence of the Bts is necessary, is there precedent for that?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:01, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- BTS has been reworded by Imp.--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 21:11, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
Imp
- Glad to see you finally wrote the Cassander sector up, Ruiz! OK, let's see...
If there are no other quotes available, please move the article's sole quote to the beginning of the intro.- Moved
Context for the Cobalt Scarab, please.- Added
In the articles for Mamkoda, Caraxl, and Sheh Soahi, you call them "astronomical objects," but in this article you refer to them as "worlds", which is a term which per precedent we reserve for planets by default.Imperators II(Talk) 17:55, 12 May 2021 (UTC)- Changed to astronomical objects
"The Kalki Nebula was known to have hidden pirate bases" is this wording used in the source? If so, does it also say known to whom?Imperators II(Talk) 18:03, 12 May 2021 (UTC)- Reworded--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 21:11, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
First Order Space can be linked somewhere.- Added--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 21:32, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
What's the justification behind having so much info about a Legends discrepancy in the Bts?Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:13, 31 May 2021 (UTC)- If I may interject here, the precedent has always to been to accurately describe a Canon subject's Legends origins in its article's BTS. The Legends Cassander sector just happens to have a relatively convoluted origin. Imperators II(Talk) 13:22, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
- Guess I was just too tired when I first read it to follow that. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:27, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- If I may interject here, the precedent has always to been to accurately describe a Canon subject's Legends origins in its article's BTS. The Legends Cassander sector just happens to have a relatively convoluted origin. Imperators II(Talk) 13:22, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:24, 12 June 2021 (UTC)