- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
CT-0292
- Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:12, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Ah, another day, another DFaceG Resistance nomi- Wait, what do you mean this is a Clone Wars nomination?
- Date Archived: 08:07, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 860 words (163 introduction, 555 body, 142 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 842 words (160 introduction, 552 body, 130 behind the scenes)
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Support
- Nice! Manoof (he/him/his)
14:07, 11 March 2023 (UTC) 
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:45, 13 March 2023 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 19:18, 17 March 2023 (UTC)
- Samonic
(Talk) 21:23, 17 March 2023 (UTC) - Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 08:06, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
Object
Uber
Vaughn's alternate weapon from the figure should be documented here.UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:43, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
Manoof
The mention of the forces in the intro sound like it's a three-way battle between the mandalorian resistance Vs the republic vs maul's forces, can you rephrase this to be clearer. You also need to watch this potential confusion later. For example you mention the division chasing mabdalorian supercommandos into the sewer, which sounds like they're from the resistance Manoof (he/him/his) 00:50, 9 March 2023 (UTC)"drawn out" indicates they were enticed as a group into a vulnerable position, is this correct as I thought they were separated and picked off. Manoof (he/him/his) 00:50, 9 March 2023 (UTC)I think mentioning last words in the intro gives the words unnecessarily more weight than the moment, and can be simplified to just their last moments/breaths. Like the last words weren't any big revelation. What do you think? Manoof (he/him/his) 00:50, 9 March 2023 (UTC)Was Tano deputised/commissioned in order to give troopers orders, saying she was an advisor downplays this and doesn't convey her position accurately Manoof (he/him/his) 00:50, 9 March 2023 (UTC)"Replied with uncertainty" doesn't let us know what the reply was, whether Vaughn suspected they did, didn't or had no idea either way Manoof (he/him/his) 00:50, 9 March 2023 (UTC)No mention of the concept artist Kilian Plunkett or date of the design itself. Manoof (he/him/his) 00:50, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
Samonic
In the intro, you identify Tano as a former Jedi Padawan. In the body, you identify Tano as an advisor and the acting commander of the Republic forces on Mandalore. Could you mention that she was a former Jedi Padawan in the body for consistency?Samonic (Talk) 21:05, 17 March 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:06, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
- Is there any particular reason why you didn't use his name when citing quotes? Because I see no reason not to do this when he's referred to by his name through 99% of the article. SilverSunbird (talk) 19:16, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
- Mainly because I'm not the one who put the quotes in save for the audio. I'll go ahead and change that. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:20, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
- All good then! That always seemed... cold... to me. SilverSunbird (talk) 19:32, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
- Mainly because I'm not the one who put the quotes in save for the audio. I'll go ahead and change that. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:20, 18 January 2023 (UTC)