Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Brullian Dyll

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Brullian Dyll

• Nominated by: - —Harrar ^{(Cut the comm chatter)} 13:54, 6 July 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: If music be the food of love, GAN.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:14, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
2. Graestan^(Talk) 00:20, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
3. Great work. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 03:12, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
4. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 12:43, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
5. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 19:28, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
6. --Eyrezer 08:29, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Attack of the Clone
   • "in order that it could be distributed once again to the galaxy": it's either "in order to" or "in order for", not "in order that"; please try to reword or replace it.
     • changed it to "so that"...not sure what I was thinking.
   • "the nature of whose work was deemed to be a threat": not flowing very well, and it's not making much sense; please try to reword.
     • Sloppy as. Reworded.
   • I don't get the tagline. :P CC7567 ^(talk) 23:16, 6 July 2009 (UTC)
     • It's a Shakespeare quotation from Twelfth Night — "If music be the food of love, play on." :) - —Harrar ^{(Cut the comm chatter)} 23:01, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
       • Figures; I don't often read much Shakespeare. :P CC7567 ^(talk) 23:14, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:54, 13 July 2009 (UTC)