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Bow (clone stormtrooper)

  • Nominated by: CC7567 (talk) 20:48, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Bow before him. (The product of a canon hiccup and a resulting hash-out between myself, Jang, and Cav.)

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:15, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
  2. 501st dogma(talk) 00:32, October 21, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 03:07, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:40, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:37, November 9, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:10, November 12, 2013 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 22:04, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object

501 has 1 thing
  • "After the Kessel incident, Bow filed reports on the termination of Choi and two of the other Jedi victims, Koffi Arana and Bultar Swan." I know this is picky, but it might be good to say that Vader killed the last two Jedi that were mentioned. 501st dogma(talk) 21:47, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
    • Well, Arana's actually the one who killed Swan, so I added a small bit about them dying before the 501st arrived. Thanks for the review. CC7567 (talk) 00:25, October 21, 2013 (UTC)
El Jefe
  • I'd like a touch of context on Order 66 in the intro, since you say they "survived" it. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 02:43, October 24, 2013 (UTC)
    • Reworked some of the context to make it flow better. Thanks for the review. CC7567 (talk) 02:07, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:20, December 16, 2013 (UTC)


  • About 850 words. CC7567 (talk) 20:48, October 20, 2013 (UTC)