Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Bondara's Folly

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Bondara's Folly

• Nominated by: OLIOSTER ^(talk) 22:03, April 9, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Crystalized poop?

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 23:08, April 23, 2013 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 23:01, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 22:16, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
4. I concur with Fred, but otherwise, it gets my support.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 16:02, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
5. Cool story brah. MasterFred^(Whatever) 13:59, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Cav

• Article for the collector?
  • I was mistaken in how the game handled the rewarding of the items. The collector NPC is not involved. Once you collected all the shards, a quest completion screen would come up asking you to choose your reward. I have changed the article to reflect and to mention the second stage of shard collection. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 13:42, April 15, 2013 (UTC)
• named for Twi'lek male Jedi Master Anoon Bondara - in the intro, you assert the crystal was named for him, but the main section says it was "seemingly named" after him. Which is correct? If its the latter, then its speculation that the crystal was named after Bondara. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:46, April 11, 2013 (UTC)
  • It is speculation. Would saying that it shared a name with him be OK? OLIOSTER ^(talk) 22:16, April 11, 2013 (UTC)
    • The refs for the first paragraph of "History" need to be more specific. I would suggest moving the SWG ref tag to the end of "name in common" while keep the Shadow Hunter one at the end for accuracy. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 15:08, April 15, 2013 (UTC)
      • Done. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 15:19, April 15, 2013 (UTC)

Clone Wars?

• Erm, what? Anoon Bondara died in 32 BBY, ten years before the Clone Wars. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:33, April 20, 2013 (UTC)
  • Sorry, I'm not really up on who he is exactly. Fixed. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 10:18, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

CC-8

• Minor point: Can you put the year Galaxies was released and that it was an MMO. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 12:35, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 18:27, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Fred strikes=

• The second sentence of the the Bts doesn't make sense to me. MasterFred^(Whatever) 04:03, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
  • I've added an explanation of what collections were and clarified the sentences a bit. Better? OLIOSTER ^(talk) 20:39, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• So yeah, I forgot about my last attempt at a GA twice. Lets hope this goes better. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 22:03, April 9, 2013 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:59, May 18, 2013 (UTC)