Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Blue macaron

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Blue macaron

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 23:15, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Was really hoping for the ultimate guide to come out for info on this one, but at least it's named.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. D MCCG D MCCG (chat) 14:18, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
  2. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:08, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Laughs in Mando visual guide OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 14:06, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 06:56, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 07:31, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Regurgitator-class gunship
  • "It was possible to vomit after eating the cookies." I don't think this part is necessary, the ability to vomit can just as easily apply to the biology of the vomitee. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 23:35, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • As much as I love the first quote attribution it should at least specify who is speaking.
  • Unless it's innacurate Yoda's species has a conjectural title tag, so it shouldn't be used directly in the article body. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:13, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • I'd vary the use of terms here; I get that they're the main stars, but there's too many instances of "cookie" and "Grogu," which makes the article too American for me to chew on.
  • Separate refs aren't needed when their only purpose is to support the names of subjects (e.g. Grogu, Meetra Surik, BTL Y-wing) OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 17:13, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Imagecat name should be the same as the article name OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 22:05, 21 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Context for why Mando was talking to Cara and the Magistrate would be great
  • Lastly, the silver sleeve thing belongs more so in Description than History OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 22:14, 21 July 2021 (UTC)
Imp
  • I'm going to have to object to the usage of "Yoda's species" like that. It's not an official name for the species, and this article gives the reader zero context on what "Yoda" is. Moreover, Yoda is completely irrelevant to this subject. On the other hand, "Grogu's species" would at least make some sense here. Imperators II(Talk) 20:55, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
  • The type of the Razor Crest is intro-exclusive.
  • Body says both the student and Grogu ate the macarons, but the intro says the student only tried to eat them. Imperators II(Talk) 22:24, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Is there a reason why you're specifying the overall number of the episode? I don't think I've seen that done on any TCW article.
  • I'd like for you to specify that ANH was a 1977 original trilogy film. Imperators II(Talk) 22:31, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
    • All fixed. Regarding #3, other Mando articles do it, but feel free to remove it if you think it shouldn't be used. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 23:14, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Of the three examples you listed, only the shaak kebab one actually uses an episode's overall number. And out of The Mandalorian-related status articles listed here, the chowder one is the only other one to do it. Both articles were written by you, so yes, I think you should introduce some consistency with TCW articles and remove it. :P Imperators II(Talk) 07:51, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)