Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Blackstar Squad

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Blackstar Squad

  • Nominated by: Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 15:39, February 26, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Project Hero. Have I mentioned how much I hate Fatal Alliance?

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. I fixed some things. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:44, February 26, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:11, March 8, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Always a pleasure reading, Cade. Nice work. :P MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 22:04, March 12, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Winterz (talk) 23:37, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 21:33, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • Context on the Hutt Cartel. You say its neutral, but that's not enough.
    • Done.
  • Any reason you're calling it Hutta instead of Nal Hutta?
    • Because that's how it's known at the time.
  • Article for the mission that sent the squad into an "urban guerrilla firefight"?
    • Done, I'll make it soon.
  • "They managed to escape the fighting with only minor injuries, and bacta treatments brought them back to full readiness. However, the squad's commanding officer Sergeant Donbar was corrupt," Is this really a "however"? They seem to be two separate thoughts.
    • Done.
  • The first sentence of the second body paragraph runs on kinda long and should probably be split up.
    • Done.
  • Context on the Power Guard project? IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:10, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
  • the Blackstars undertook missions on hostile environments - do you mean in hostile environments, or on planets with hostile environments here? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:31, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:33, March 15, 2013 (UTC)