Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Biel Ductavis

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Biel Ductavis

• Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 00:03, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Was on the CANs. For the barn burner.

(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Looks good to me. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 03:24, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
2. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 15:49, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
3. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 00:49, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
4. JangFett ^(Talk) 01:07, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
5. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 01:09, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 06:11, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
7. Going for the snowball! Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:32, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Grunny

• "that began in 11,965 BBY and lasted for nearly one millennium" You provide context for the time period of the Pius Dea crusades in the intro but not in the body. I'd suggest either including it in both or only including it in the body, not only in the intro.
• "the arrest of Supreme Chancellor Contispex XIX in 10,966 BBY" You provide a date for the event in the intro but not in the body, no info present in the intro should be absent from the body of the article. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 04:35, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
  • Taken care of both. Thanks for the review, Grunny!—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:52, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:13, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

• Star Wars: The Old Republic contains the following sentence about Ductavis (although he's not named): "A new Chancellor was elected, free of Pius Dea’s influence, and the Pius Dea "Supreme Temple" was destroyed…but the tensions created between the Core Worlds and the Outer Rim persisted for centuries to come." The only new information seems to be that he was elected, which kind of disagrees with the information in the article that has the Jedi Council installing him. I guess he could have been elected by the people as well. Here's the source information: {{TORcite|type=codex|Galactic History 19: The Pius Dea Crusades}}--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:24, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
  • Though {{TORcite}} should only be used in the reference. It'd be too aggravating to use as appearances or sources. Cade Calrayn 00:28, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
    • Could I use it as a quote?—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 00:33, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
      • Hmmm, I'm not sure if the codex datacron entries are in-universe or not.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:37, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
        • I placed a note in the BTS, would that work?—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 00:39, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
          • Seems fine to me.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:42, December 27, 2012 (UTC)