Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Birgis (second nomination)

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Battle of Birgis

• Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 11:11, March 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

(Votes required: No additional votes required to pass, please consider reviewing another article.)

Support

1. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 11:02, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
2. 1358 ^(Talk) 20:45, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
3. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:35, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
4. Tommy-Macaroni 17:58, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
5. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:39, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Ecks Dee

• Please clarify the significance of the Vong landing at Helska IV. Was it the opening battle of the war?
  • One word of context on Seline wouldn't hurt either. I also did some rewording in that sentence, so please make sure the referencing looks intact. 1358 ^(Talk) 16:40, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
    • Added. OtterSurf (talk) 17:58, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
• The first sentence of the second paragraph of "The battle" is quite a run-on. Please split it up. 1358 ^(Talk) 12:52, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
  • Both sorted. OtterSurf (talk) 13:43, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
• Grammatical articles such as the do not go inside links.
• Please check my latest copy-edit to make sure it's accurate. 1358 ^(Talk) 17:17, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • Looks good. "The galaxy" keeps tripping me up; I'll work on that. OtterSurf (talk) 18:00, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • "The galaxy" is fine because "the" is part of the name. However, what I'm referring to is in Aftermath. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:02, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • Gotcha. Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 18:34, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Tommy

• Context for Cham Detta.
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 17:45, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
• Reviewing note: the Legends article is Extra-galactic; Extragalactic is canon. Please keep this in mind as I've noticed this in a couple of your noms. Tommy-Macaroni 16:33, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Got it. Thanks. OtterSurf (talk) 17:45, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• OtterSurf, do you think it's OK to immediately renominate an article when you haven't even taken the time to properly address the objections on the previous nomination? Imperators II^(Talk) 11:17, March 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • I went over Ecks' objections and fixed them. OtterSurf (talk) 11:32, March 21, 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:43, May 18, 2020 (UTC)