Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Aristocracy

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Aristocracy

  • Nominated by: Dropbearemma (she/her) 05:34, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: How dare this tip over the CAN word count. Really struggled with the sectioning here, so any advice on that front is appreciated!
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Support

  1. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 06:35, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
  2. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 11:17, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote OOM 224 07:30, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote The Virgillian saga continues. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:04, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
  5. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 15:41, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • Good work overall, just two things:
    • "Ships of the Imperial Navy patrolled the system for Free Alignment activity, including the Victory-class Star Destroyer Stormwind, under the command of Captain Jarroth." Were the Imperial ships under the command of Jarroth and were looking for the Stormwind, or was the Stormwind among the patrolling ships? Please amend.
    • It reads very weird to introduce "Rannd Delckis's parents" and then later identify Rannd as the son. Rannd should be supplied context first. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:07, 21 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:09, 28 October 2022 (UTC)