Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Althon

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Althon

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These Droids stories are really amazing! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:38, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
Per LucaRoR — Samonic 09:46, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:59, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:39, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:27, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

~~Do we really need that note to say "that year?"~~
- I think it's helpful since the previous bit about the date only mentions an event that took place by that year.
~~"The governor then tripled the amount for their disobedience," I assume he tripled the amount of taxes they had to pay. If that is the case, what would you say about specifying it?~~
- Done.
~~The first sentence of the third paragraph is pretty long; could you maybe divide it into two smaller sentences?~~
- Done.
~~The full release date for the comic is needed in the BTS.~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:02, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
- Not available. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:06, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

~~Redlink in body.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:18, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
- I couldn't find any. Maybe after the objection, another user created an article, possibly not even looking at this article or nomination, but from it being linked to another article? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:40, 16 July 2022 (UTC)

~~Skin colour needs to be mentioned~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:48, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:10, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

~~"when Kugg and the council delivered the payments to Kugg" should this be when Athon and the council?~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:50, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
- Oops, thanks. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:52, 7 August 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:27, 12 August 2022 (UTC)