- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Alec Efran
- Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:09, October 14, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: WP:TOR
(3 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
- 501st dogma(talk) 12:13, October 19, 2013 (UTC)
- Note you forgot the ref tag before the mechanics template with your recent edit. I fixed it for you, but just be more careful. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:29, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 03:09, October 25, 2013 (UTC)- Trip391 (talk) 15:42, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:23, November 4, 2013 (UTC)
I removed the homeworld field, as it's speculation to say he's from Coruscant. That's not something I've seen done before. Cade 
Calrayn 19:27, November 5, 2013 (UTC)
Object
501st
Source first bio sentence.- Done.
What is a Noetikon? You state in the quote that it was a holocron, but not so in the bio.- Added.
Are you sure he fought the Gand? Or did he just arrest him?- In one part of the dialogue the Gand says he should have put up more of a fight indicating there was some kind of fight.
- Good work. 501st dogma(talk) 20:43, October 17, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks. Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:23, October 18, 2013 (UTC)
Hanzo
The stuff from before the Barsen'thor's arrival should not be 100% game completion, as those events definitely happened regardless of whether the player decided to arrive and question the Gand. As such, that stuff should be moved to before the gameplay mechanics template begins.Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:47, October 20, 2013 (UTC)- Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 21:52, October 21, 2013 (UTC)
El Jefe
Would like a word or two of context on the Noetikon of Science in your intro.- Done.
No parentheses. Figure out a way to work around it.Good work. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:08, October 24, 2013 (UTC)- Done. Thanks! Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:32, October 24, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
I'd like to see an Equipment section detail his apparel and any other items that may be character-specific to him.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:51, October 28, 2013 (UTC)- No problem, but would it be enough to warrant a section since the only thing that would be listed is that he wears a uniform and carries a blaster? I ask because I haven't done one of those sections for past GA articles that were also CSF characters from the game. Coruscantfan (Talk) 15:52, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
- Going with what Tope said, the uniforms were often overlooked in the past, and the emphasis on including them is kind of more recent. However, including weapons has been the norm for a while, and had I been aware of those other noms not mentioning the blasters when the characters were known to have them, I'd have objected back then. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:04, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
- Section added. Coruscantfan (Talk) 06:09, November 3, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks. If the CSF have a certain standardized uniform, you might consider creating an article to detail that. Category:Uniforms is a nice place to start looking into that. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:23, November 4, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks, I'll get started on that. Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:44, November 5, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks. If the CSF have a certain standardized uniform, you might consider creating an article to detail that. Category:Uniforms is a nice place to start looking into that. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:23, November 4, 2013 (UTC)
- Section added. Coruscantfan (Talk) 06:09, November 3, 2013 (UTC)
- Going with what Tope said, the uniforms were often overlooked in the past, and the emphasis on including them is kind of more recent. However, including weapons has been the norm for a while, and had I been aware of those other noms not mentioning the blasters when the characters were known to have them, I'd have objected back then. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:04, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
- No problem, but would it be enough to warrant a section since the only thing that would be listed is that he wears a uniform and carries a blaster? I ask because I haven't done one of those sections for past GA articles that were also CSF characters from the game. Coruscantfan (Talk) 15:52, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
Cadeth
You can't call the Consular the Barsen'thor yet, as they don't get that title until the end of Act I.- I changed the wording a bit, see if that works better.
Also, why do you have the gamemechanics templates? They should be explained in the BTS if you have them. Cade Calrayn 21:07, November 4, 2013 (UTC)- Added. Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:44, November 5, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:24, November 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Originally overlooked, but proof of his homeworld being Coruscant? Don't have the game myself, but wonder if the fact he served in the CSF is your only "proof," or it's confirmed by the game. Not making an objection because I don't know. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 06:01, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
- With character articles from the game we have listed the planet they live on or are located at as their homeworld unless the game indicates a different homeworld. Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:29, October 23, 2013 (UTC)