Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Akial

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Akial

  • Nominated by: Jinzler 12:48, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: a Jawa Jedi

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Nice! --Eyrezer 02:23, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Jawa Jedi? What's next? An Ewok Jedi? Wait, scratch that ... --Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 13:32, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
  3. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:39, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
  4. JangFett Talk 22:30, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 19:47, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. Fett's 2 cents
    • Missing {{Ref|}} tags in infobox
      • I always forget these :) I have now added them --Jinzler 21:45, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
    • His biography section is too subsectioned. Can you merge "Celebration on Dorumaa" with "Jedi Student".
      • Merged --Jinzler 21:45, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
    • "He passed and became a Jedi Knight." Merge this with the previous sentence.
      • Merged --Jinzler 21:45, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
    • "The Kel Dor Jedi Guardian Krin D'bis was chosen to accompany Akial because, due their different specializations within the order, they could represent different approaches to being a Jedi." Run-on, shorten it up.
      • Shortened --Jinzler 21:45, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
    • Seeing that you used few sources for references, you need a ==Sources== section.
    • JangFett Talk 15:25, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
      • No, he doesn't. That's not how the Sources section works. I think you need to take another look at the this page and ensure that you haven't been labouring under false pretenses in your other articles. -- —Harrar (Cut the comm chatter) 17:40, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
  2. Attack of Fett, part 2
    • P&T:"He could speak Basic without an accent." Merge this with the previous language sentence.
      • Merged --Jinzler 21:25, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
    • "The celebration had been organized by the Metatheran Cartel, a trade organization that was jointly run by members of the Caarite and Filordus species, to thank a group of freelance agents for preventing the release of a dangerous virus on the Caarite homeworld." Split this sentence into two sentences.
      • Done --Jinzler 21:25, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
    • JangFett Talk 23:51, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
      • Thanks for your review --Jinzler 21:25, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:50, 29 June 2009 (UTC)