Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/1047

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1047

• Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 12:34, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
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Support

1. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:54, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
2. — Samonic 16:52, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:04, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 16:08, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 14:35, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha

• "Desert Sands sandtrooper" I must admit the naming doesn't fit well, and since I can find other official names for the specialisation (I'm assuming from the capitalisation that Desert Sands santrooper is an official term), I would recommend adjusting it to remove the repeated use of "sand." (Anakin would be most grateful :P)
• The second bio header appears a tad beefy to be a section title, especially since a comma has to split it. I think it would be better to merge the elements of the title somehow to make it smaller. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 00:09, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:14, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
• Context needed for Han Solo.
• Since the first bio image doesn't depict events around 1047, it can be used in the second second instead to spread out the clutter. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:14, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:06, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• "Human" needs a note instead of a flat reference to a source that does not mention the subject.
• Seeing the lead quote makes me skeptical that the subject is indeed named "1047" and not "Ten forty-seven." What's the story here? We're not supposed to convert such names to numbers if no sources do so.
• Please mention the pauldron in Equipment.
• Context for A New Hope.
• Mediacat? UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:05, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
  • All addressed. As for the name, he's called ten forty-seven in quotes, 1047 in narrative text. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:12, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Then the name should be documented here as an alternate name for the subject. UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:39, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
• I'm almost certain there is filming information for that cantina scene. Please investigate The Making of Star Wars: The Definitive Story Behind the Original Film as a start. UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:42, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed filming stuff and the name objection. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:22, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

OOM

• You should reword "one less Jawa slime" instead of repeating it three times in the article OOM 224 15:55, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:02, 29 April 2022 (UTC)

Ecks

• "When Terrik communicated through the troopers' helmet speakers to go to Docking Bay 94, 1047 shouted for Felth to follow him, and ordered the crowd that had gathered outside the docking bay to move aside." I don't think this says anything about 1047's personality or traits. 1358 ^(Talk) 13:55, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:34, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:35, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

• Reviewing note: Since I'm having to fix this repeatedly in your nominations, "although" should be used in place of "though" in formal writing. UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:55, 27 April 2022 (UTC)