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'Ndranth Poussan

  • Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:34, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The last of the Agamarian recruits. Spellings of his name outnumber appearances by three to one.
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  1. Great work. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 00:18, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
  2. Liverpool92Ackbar HS 19:11, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 13:43, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote OOM 224 12:41, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:17, 10 August 2021 (UTC)

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Macaroni
  • Can you add some context for Brigia?
  • Is there another quote that can be used in Personality and traits? If not, do you think you can split up the opening quote and use part of that one?
    • The only other relevant quote is "Still angry over the news about Poussan, I engaged T/F groups Alpha, Beta, and Delta." It's not exactly interesting, so I split the opening one. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:46, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Otherwise, solid work. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 20:10, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
  • I also think it's worth mentioning Sunnar and Keyan's conversation about him after he died. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 06:09, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Added, along with a bit on Farlander's reaction from the subsequent after-action report. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:46, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Date note needs to mention Poussan's death.
    • Added. Green Tentacle (Talk) 11:27, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Is CSWE the only source to confirm his death? If so, it needs to be mentioned in the note. This also means that both the year and place of death can be sourced to this note. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 13:20, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
        • No, his death was first referenced in the strategy guide, from where the timing is taken. CSWE just clarifies the location as "near Briggia." Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:32, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
  • I do think the intro can be expanded beyond 3 sentences with a summary of Poussan's training. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:01, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Since the bio has four paragraphs it can be sub-sectioned with the quote you mentioned above used for the second section. There's also probably room for another image of Agamar or something. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:45, 7 August 2021 (UTC)

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