Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Saul Karath

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Saul Karath

• Requested By: —spookywilloww^talk
• Date Requested: 21:43, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
• Date Archived: 05:02, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

• Update tagged for over a month.
  • This was handled, it appears. Cade Calrayn 04:22, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
• Death field references to be merged to use only one, per modern precedent.—spookywilloww^talk 21:43, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Above done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 02:31, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
• Partially cited behind the scenes. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:34, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 02:31, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Note the edit I just made to the behind the scenes. For some time, the precedent is to only list sources or appearances that are noteworthy. Essentially, off the top of my head those are first appearances, first sources (if any sources precede appearances), first visual depictions (if not the first thing that shows the subject), anything that has information on actors, voice actors, etc, inconsistencies, and (not applicable to this article) if they originate in either non-canon or out-of-universe media prior to their first in-universe appearance or source. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:49, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
      • Yep, no worries. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 03:29, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
• Context for Corellia in the intro. Context for Arkania, the Testament, Dantooine, Rakata Prime, in the body Lewisr (talk) 18:50, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
• Missing skills and abilities and equipment sections, it seems like some of the info currently in the PT can be split into some of these missing sections Lewisr (talk) 18:50, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
• To confirm, are the first pronouns usage citable to the current refs cited? Lewisr (talk) 18:51, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Three above done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 12:01, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
• This image is suboptimally cropped and should have the lines removed from all four sides.
• Infobox cites Saul's pronouns to ref 4, but the body's first usage of those is sourced to ref 1.
• Per here, the 3996 BBY date should be tied down with a note to New Essential Chronology or something else and not rely on the DH timeline only present in some printings for ToTJ.
• I'm seeing several instances of double referencing that can be better arranged to cite to specific parts of sentences.
• "system of Suurja through…" if it's referring to the system, should this not be linking instead to the Suurja system?
• Vanquo can be properly contexualized as a world, and Myrkr missing context as well.
  • Six above done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 04:29, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
• Paragraphs in "The Adasca Affair" are too chunky in the current Fandom skin and should be split. The subsection can then be divided into two with additional images + another quote to populate.
• "Covenant Affair" and "Capturing Dace Golliard" have space for another image. "Jedi Civil War" does as well, when the second paragraph is split for being too large.
  • Two above done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 03:06, 31 January 2024 (UTC)
• Pass through needed for dupe links.
  • Dupe links sorted. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 04:29, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
• BtS: Modernization will have NEC and TCSWE mentions moved down to where they're discussed under inconsistencies; we don't include the 'so and so expanded a character's backstory' wording anymore. KOTOR campaign guide should have the month removed and have its mention moved down to the paragraph below.
• BtS: If linking to and discussing KOTOR issue 21, that needs its author and full release date, for being a comic.
• BtS: An image of either the game's cover or of John Jackson Miller would fit in the BtS.
  • Three above done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 09:00, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
• If mentioned in The New Essential Chronology, that requires an IU mention similar to this.
  • IU mention added. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 04:42, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
• "…always seeking to establish a distinction between Morvis and Karath. Karath had a hardscrabble youth; Morvis was the son of wealth and power." — JJM. Seems to not be reflected in the BtS. Given how old this FA is, most of JJM's other blogs should be checked as well for missing info as I'm not confident in everything being there.—spookywilloww^talk 18:40, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Added to BTS and I'll have a look at his other blogs, although, I believe everything's there now. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 09:28, 30 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

• Marked as on probation due to second-round objections unaddressed for 1 month.—spookywilloww^talk 02:33, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

1. —spookywilloww^talk 03:08, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 03:09, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
3. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 05:01, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

Vote to strip Featured status