Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Miltin Takel

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Miltin Takel

Object

  • Equipment section needed.
  • Bts needs to be trimmed.
    • What exactly are you referring to? Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 14:26, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
      • sentances ie "Takel was also mentioned in the Shadows of the Empire Sourcebook, which revealed that the character was one of the customers of the spice dealer Wendell Wright-Sims.[2]" which aren't necessary ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 00:55, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
  • IU mention in The New Essential Chronology and The Essential Chronology
  • The external link leads to a page that my device shows in blank.
    • I can't access it either. Removed. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 08:52, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Remove GRS date in infobox
  • Who's Who does not say he died in 5 ABY
    • If this is indeed his death date, it will need to be noted in the body.
      • Did something to fix this. I don't think it's the best way to do it, but that's what I thought of. :P Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 08:59, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Refs need to be split, many paragraphs have the format "Paragraph[1][2]
  • Ref 12 does not support the date in its sentence.
    • Not sure the date was even accurate. Fixed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:28, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Remove page numbers
  • "In 3 ABY, the people of Mandalore, bolstered by their victory at the Battle of the City of Bone, rallied behind their leader, Fenn Shysa, and rose up against Takel's forces, whose territory included his home Mandalore sector.[10]" check if the insider article actually uses the 3 ABY date.
    • The date's accurate, but not from that source. Fixed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 00:04, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
  • The information about Dirty Dozen: The Imperial Grand Admirals was never officialy released. I think that any information that is not actually supported by statements from the autors should be removed. (See Wookieepedia:Inq/Ishin-Il-Raz (second review)) While it appears there is a word document that purports to be the original manuscript, there is no way of knowing if that is actually the original manuscript, and so info directly cited to Dirty Dozen should be removed. (of course, information that Wallace and Pena have actually stated about Dirty Dozen can stay). ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 19:12, 24 March 2023 (UTC)
    • This keeps coming up about Grand Admiral articles. The Word document was last modified by "dwallace" on 22 November 2004. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:32, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
      • Where can this thing be found? ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 01:29, 29 March 2023 (UTC)
        • It has been previously shared with the admins and Inquisitors. Green Tentacle (Talk) 00:04, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
          • Any chance you could re-share this? Looks like none of the current Inqs have access to it, for one. Imperators II(Talk) 20:37, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
            • Sent you a link on Discord. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:52, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
              • ThrawnChiss, consensus among review panel members is to keep covering info from this article, although for copyright reasons we're most likely not going to make it publicly available. It can be shared with you privately though if you'd like. Imperators II(Talk) 07:22, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to retain Featured status

  1. Inqvote Per the Inq consensus on the offsite doc, everything else seems solved.—spookywillowwtalk 18:44, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 16:48, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 15:26, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

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