Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Darth Malak

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Darth Malak

• Requested By: UberSoldat93
• Date Requested: 20:05, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
• Date Archived: 05:00, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

• Note in-universe mentions in multiple sources.
  • <fixing indentation>
    • Would like more context for The Journal of Master Gnost-Dural. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:27, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
      • Done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 09:53, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
• Equipment section. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:06, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 09:21, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
• Ensure the new section titles have quotes where available.
  • Combed through the KOTOR string files and there's nothing about his equipment or his jaw. Nothing in any other source that I can think of either, though I added one for the BTS section. Cade Calrayn 17:41, 28 August 2023 (UTC)
• I can still see space for new images. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:27, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Both done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 07:17, 29 July 2023 (UTC)
• Per modern standard, death date and location should use one ref for the field.—spookywilloww^talk 18:15, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 16:04, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
• At least a couple dup links I can see Lewisr (talk) 18:40, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
• Context for Serroco, Dantooine (this one should be moved from later mentions to the first mention), Althir, Rakata Prime Lewisr (talk) 18:40, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
  • All done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 09:04, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
    • I should have also included ones for the intro, Malachor V, Rakata Prime, Dantooine Lewisr (talk) 15:47, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
      • Fixed. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 16:04, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
• Duron has another vision of Malak while in Dreshdae which should be noted Lewisr (talk) 18:37, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
• I do not see pronouns for Duron being used in the "Shadows and Light" story, so those will need to be cited in another source. With this, the rest of the first pronoun usages for others will also need to be checked and cited if they cannot be to the current reference listed Lewisr (talk) 18:37, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Both done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 12:00, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
• {{CSWECite}} to be implemented for the The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia ref.
• Shel Jelavan should be properly contextualized upon first linking, as it currently just says he's an individual with a brother.
  • Both fixed. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 02:51, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
• "Against the Jedi Covenant" and "Vision on Cathar" both have four paragraphs each—which under modern precedent, we try to stick to 2-3, unless there's exceptional circumstance. These should likely both be split in half. Just briefly eyeing down the rest of the article, these are not the only sections that suffer from this issue or the old-style chunkier paragraphs, most of which should be split up and populated with more images.—spookywilloww^talk 18:54, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Done. —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 10:54, 3 February 2024 (UTC)

Comments

• Marked as on probation due to second-round objections 1-month unaddressed.—spookywilloww^talk 02:32, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

1. It's been baking here without new objections for awhile tbf and just generally been up for ages.—spookywilloww^talk 04:15, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 04:17, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
3. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 04:54, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

Vote to strip Featured status