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Battle of Brentaal IV (Galactic Civil War)
- Requested By: UberSoldat93
(talk)
- Date Requested: 14:38, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 19:22, 9 July 2023 (UTC)
Object
- Infobox-exclusive information, such as unit composition.
- Brentaal IV's context in the infobox is extraneous.
- GrS date can be eliminated; 4 ABY should have a note attached to it directly.
- Having scanned through the issue multiple times, I am unable to find the A-9 Vigilance interceptors that the article claims were present. In fact, at least one source establishes the introduction of the ship to be well after this battle.
- Found them at last, when Wedge meets Koyi again. UberSoldat93
(talk) 06:11, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
- Found them at last, when Wedge meets Koyi again. UberSoldat93
- Eliminate references to story arcs.
- The comic issue supports Bormea sector placement directly.
- Could use more sectioning.
- Underlinking, starting from infobox.
- Uncropped speech bubbles should have their text restored per image policy.
- Missing a Mediacat.
- Layout Guide does not permit a "Notable participants" section.
- Document in-universe mentions in the Essential Chronologies.
- Unsourced BTS, which is also missing alternate names and comic publication date.
- Check/add audiobooks: Abridged and unabridged. UberSoldat93
(talk) 14:38, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 13:04, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
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Has objections outstanding for two months.—spookywillowwtalk 00:35, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 11:17, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 19:21, 9 July 2023 (UTC)