Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Zythmnr

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Zythmnr

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:55, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Vowels? We don't need no stinking vowels!

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote "Y" is sometimes a vowel! Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 02:30, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 20:53, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Sorry that I forgot about this...should be all good now.—Tommy 9281 18:18, September 20, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:46, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:06, September 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Xicer
  • Is it ever explained why Zythmnr and the others were waiting for someone like Kun?
    • Not really, no.
  • Bio: "Naga Sadow used Sith magic to twist Zythmnr's ancestors into violent, uncivilized beasts that used the dark side of the Force to use their weapons." Overuse of "use(d)".
    • Addressed.
  • Based on the quotes, it seems that in the comic he speaks some sort of alien language, while he speaks Basic in the audio drama. That might be worth mentioning in the Bts.
    • Addressed.
  • Good work. I was tempted to make the infobox pic 250px. =P Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 02:11, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
One, two, Tommy's comin for you…
  • If I recall correctly, Zythmnr met the Kun and the other Massassi in the jungle. "The Massassi priest emerged in 3997 BBY, when fallen Jedi Knight Exar Kun, knocked unconscious in a fight with Massassi guards, was brought to Zythmnr's temple," and "and his unconscious body was taken to Zythmnr's temple."
    • You do recall correctly; I recalled incorrectly. Addressed.
  • Linking issues.
    • Addressed, I believe.
  • Did Zythmnr accuse Kun of coming to steal the amulets in the comic?
    • No. That part in the P&T has been fixed.
  • P&T could be expanded a bit with some info from the audio drama.
    • Has been expanded somewhat; tell me if this satisfies your objection.
  • You make mention of Zythmnr's use of Sith amulets and his power in the dark side. Is there not enough information in any of the sources to warrant the addition of a P&A?
    • P&A added.
  • Tense shifting in the BtS.
    • Fixed.
  • That's all.—Tommy 9281 00:03, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
Green Tentacle
  • "Calling upon the power of the dark side, Kun used the Force to take Zythmnr's Sith amulets, and used its dark properties to destroy the monster." Is "its" referring to the amulets? If so, shouldn't it be "their." Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:56, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
    • Addressed. As far as I know, the only amulet he had was the same one Exar Kun took from him. I changed all the instances of "amulets" to "amulet."—Tommy 9281 19:13, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:06, September 30, 2010 (UTC)