Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Zodoh

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Zodoh

• Nominated by: Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:12, July 10, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Kneel before Zodoh!

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 00:17, July 12, 2013 (UTC)
2. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 06:20, October 2, 2013 (UTC)
3. There could maybe be a mention of how Zodoh's death is never confirmed, but otherwise good work. Cade Calrayn 15:44, October 18, 2013 (UTC)
4. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 20:01, November 6, 2013 (UTC)
5. Protectorate (talk) 22:35, November 26, 2013 (UTC)
6. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:12, December 23, 2013 (UTC)

Object

El Jefe

• Should there be an article on Zodoh's organization?
  • Poorly worded. Removed the reference to it entirely. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:22, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
• "Hutt Space was locked in internecine clan warfare with the Sith playing different clans against each other. Growing tired of the clan warfare," Double "clan warfare".
  • Reworded. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:22, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
• Context on the Chagras Hegemony. Should probably be mentioned that it was a Sith state.
  • Done. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:22, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
• "and positioned one of his Stormdrivers over Capital Cay's bay" Article for this Stormdriver?
  • Redlinked. I'll make an article in a bit since it's up to four now. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:22, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
    • Now down to one redlink. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:15, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
• Context on Vahss.
  • Meh, he's not that important. Took him out. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:22, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
• "Zodoh intended to turn entire planetary populations, including adults and children," Is the "including adults and children" necessary? I mean, that pretty much covers everyone.
  • True. Removed. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:22, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
• Context on Joad Kreel.
  • I figured survivor covered it. Is that better? Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:22, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
• "Before she could her weapon," Before she could what her weapon? IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 01:44, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:22, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• img caption punctuation plz
  • Oh yeah. Forgot to check the captions. Done. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 22:09, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
• Would it be relevant to link starfighter combat anywhere? CC7567 ^(talk) 21:52, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
  • Added a link. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 22:09, December 23, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 22:12, December 23, 2013 (UTC)