Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Zingo Gabnit

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Zingo Gabnit

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:02, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: This whole comic is basically a spaghetti western so theme music
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Comics

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

1. — Samonic 09:28, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:21, 16 June 2022 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:35, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 17:23, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
5. DFaceG (talk) 17:39, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
6. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:03, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
7. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:52, 29 August 2022 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• Unlike in Legends, "rebel" on its own shouldn't be capitalised in Canon articles.
  • Forgot to get that, done
• You'll want to double-check and see if you really want to link to this Thermal Detonator article :P
  • facepalm
• I think it'd be better to refer to the Xan sisters simply as "criminals" rather than a "criminal organization," considering there's only two of them. OOM 224 22:06, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
  • It's a wider gang per this line about them in the comic "They've been terrorizing the local farms for years, I've picked off a couple of their gang members, but I can't finish them alone." Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:49, 26 February 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• I feel "mean" is a bit informal and would prefer alternatives.
  • Done
• I can see he has an NN-14 blaster pistol. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:54, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Added, do I need another source to identify the model? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:28, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Not needed, we can visually identify it. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:52, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
• On my display, at least, those bio paragraphs are pretty large and need some further breaks e.g. The first paragraph of Cornered is 15 lines long. This will in fact create more space for additional images. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:56, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Hope I haven't gone overboard Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:29, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Much better looking overall. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:03, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Article for gear grease?
  • Just linked to grease since I think that's as specific as it needs to be
• Can you specify that Danan Karr is on Carajam? On my first read I thought it was another planet they were going to.
  • Done
• "He responded by killing the Rodian and began firing on the villagers, killing several." - can you avoid the repetitive wording of "killing"?
  • Done
• Even image captions whose sentences are present-tense can be considered full sentences (eg Gabnit and Fett duel.), so full stops are needed in a couple places.
  • Done
• Review note: here's my copy-edit. It's mostly grammar stuff - watch out for comma usage, I had to fix a lot of it. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:39, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Thanks, I know I can get carried away with those Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:17, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• I restructured the bts, let me know if you have an issue with it. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:28, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
  • All g Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:39, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:09, 29 August 2022 (UTC)