Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Zelka Forn

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Zelka Forn

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Looks solid. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:20, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:59, April 11, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:55, April 14, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:45, April 17, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 00:05, May 2, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote CC7567 (talk) 00:01, May 20, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Cav
  • The quote for "Finding a cure" - are the ellipses formatted that way in the source? Or do they need to be replaced with … markup code? The one with four ellipses may be exempt if formatted that way in the game files, but at the very least the second one should be altered.
    • That's how it appears in the files.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:32, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
      • I changed the second instance to markup code.
  • Shouldn't the line " Taking the serum, Revan spurned Kang’s offer and instead gave it to Forn, who offered him fifty credits and two medpacs for it." be inside the LS mechanics tag as well?
    • The paragraph above it should technically be there, as well. Fixed.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:32, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
  • The player can also sell the Rakghoul serum to the Hutt criminal Zax and earn one thousand credits or persuade Zax into paying one thousand five hundred credits. If the player has a high enough persuade skill; from doing this, the player will gain dark side points - should the persuade skill modifier be attached to the previous sentence, with the notation of the character gaining dark side points by doing so standing alone? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 21:29, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
ToRsO bOy
  • I see you have a link for centuries on the Legacy portion of the article, but you kept the one on the Lead a red link. I would have changed it myself but I'm not sure if there's a reason for it?
  • "hired a Republic operative to retrieve the serum" Is the Republic operative here the playable character for TOR? Is there a link for that? --ToRsO bOy (talk) 00:05, April 13, 2013 (UTC)
    • I'm asking Cade about this.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 17:38, April 13, 2013 (UTC)
      • The quest is available to all Republic-sided players, so I can't specify who did the quest.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 20:14, April 13, 2013 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • Article for kolto tank?
  • "political affliction"? Do you mean affiliation?
    • I do, and it's fixed. But you gotta admit that it's one heck of a typo win.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 15:15, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
  • There was some underlinking; stuff like Sith, day, soldier, etc.
  • Rakghoul isn't capitalized in the sources I've seen, and it's not capitalized on our article. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 20:49, April 24, 2013 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • Even though it was only a corpse, it sounds like there's enough information available to have an article on the Sith trooper carrying the serum.
  • "Forn's serum would be recovered over three centuries after the bombardment of the planet only hours later": the chronology of this sentence isn't clear, as there are two time markers—"over three centuries" and "only hours later"—without it being clear what refers to what. Please break this up somehow to make the chronology clear. CC7567 (talk) 19:25, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
  • Also, any available, relevant images? CC7567 (talk) 19:26, May 14, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 00:01, May 20, 2013 (UTC)