Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Worror

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Worror

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

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  1. Another good job for you, Tommy. :) IFYLOFD (And now, young Skywalker, you will die.) 20:02, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 01:07, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Clean, very neat. Thefourdotelipsis 05:33, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Wow, seriously impressed here. Nice job eliminating the flowery parts of your writing and telling the story straight-up. Cull Tremayne 14:33, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:33, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Jaina Solo(Talk) 13:30, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

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  1. IFYLOFD:
    • Good job, but one little thing: Worror went to battle alongside such notable Masters as Lord Valenthyne Farfalla, and in the final campaign of the war, Worror served under Lord Hoth. An bit of an awkward sentence in my opinion. I suggest you reword it. IFYLOFD (And now, young Skywalker, you will die.) 22:56, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
  2. Chack Attack:
    • "Most of his associates referred to him only by his first name, for only members of his native species possessed the four throats and two mouths required to pronounce his last." Unless the book explicitly says this, I don't think it's necessary.
      • Book explicitly says this.
    • Also, does it actually say that he never wielded a lightsaber?
      • Yessir, it actually says that he never carried/used one.
    • Good work Tommy. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:57, 12 November 2008 (UTC)
      • Always a pleasure, Chack. Thanks for the review.

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