Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Valius Ying

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Valius Ying

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 05:00, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I've got a bike. You can ride it if you like.

(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Clean.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 16:06, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
2. CC7567 ^(talk) 17:57, September 28, 2013 (UTC)
3. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 02:22, October 3, 2013 (UTC)
4. Cade Calrayn 02:24, October 9, 2013 (UTC)
5. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 16:22, October 12, 2013 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:14, October 16, 2013 (UTC)
7. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:40, October 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Attack of the Clone

• Would a more closely cropped headshot be possible for use in the infobox?
• For the intro and Bio, I'd recommend splitting up the paragraphs somewhere, since aesthetically all of them are on the long side.
• Context needed on the Oroko in the intro. (Is it just a starship?) CC7567 ^(talk) 03:41, September 21, 2013 (UTC)
  • Fixed the last two, will take care of the image when I have more time. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 23:38, September 27, 2013 (UTC)
    • Cropped the image. Take a look and see if it's OK. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 03:11, September 28, 2013 (UTC)

Cadeth

• In the words of Culator: HE HAS 4 FINGERS THIS IS IMPORTANT
  • Done.
• Description of his blaster and outfit? Maybe a mention of the fact that the blaster was designed but never shown?
  • I mean, I could have something about the blaster, but it's never seen in a canon source, only in Ching's sketch. I could make an Equipment section about the outfit, but I don't think the blaster should be included. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 22:15, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
• You could get a BTS quote from Miller's production notes that you link to in the BTS. Cade Calrayn 04:16, September 28, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 22:15, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

4dot

• Perhaps something on what happened immediately after Ying's death in regards to Carrick might be in order. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 13:38, October 1, 2013 (UTC)
• Oh, and mentioning his death again in the P&T is redundant. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 13:39, October 1, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 08:40, October 17, 2013 (UTC)