Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Thilis-Brin

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Thilis-Brin

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 04:33, August 13, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 17:38, August 13, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Superb as usual. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 05:32, October 3, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote You forgot {{1stm}}. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 01:21, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:39, November 8, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:32, November 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi
  • "...as non-Humans made up nine-five percent of the local population." Is that supposed to be ninety-five percent?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:55, August 13, 2013 (UTC)
    • It should be, corrected.
  • Isn't that a cybernetic arm in the image? I didn't notice it mentioned in the article.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:57, August 13, 2013 (UTC)
    • It's a tool. Not sure which one, but notice that the arm has an elbow bend already, and the hand gripping the base of the implement. Also, no cybernetic arm is mentioned in her entry. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 08:03, August 13, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I would suggest considering divvying up much of the P/T into both a "Skills and abilities" and "Equipment" section, according to the Layout Guide. I added a paragraph break in there at one point. Just about everything after that would fall under "Skills and abilities," I believe, except for the last sentence about her weapons and equipment. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:46, November 7, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 13:32, November 9, 2013 (UTC)