Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Skirmish at the gundark nest

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Skirmish at the gundark nest

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 12:00, May 18, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: 37 words over 1000, blame the prelude.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/2 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:08, May 19, 2014 (UTC)
2. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 17:28, June 17, 2014 (UTC)
3. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 01:43, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:06, September 6, 2014 (UTC)
5. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 11:02, September 27, 2014 (UTC)
6. Cade Calrayn 01:25, September 30, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Once more than ten soldiers had been trained,[3] Chewbacca led the soldiers towards the gundark's nest to attack.: Can you reword the second "soldier"?
  • Sure thing.
• I noticed some comma errors, please have a look at them. Overall, very nice work. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:10, May 18, 2014 (UTC)
  • I think I got some but probably missed a few, thanks. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 08:29, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• "One of the first structures built by the Trade Federation was a power core" I am not sure why this is considered to be one of the first structures built. I don't remember the game explicitly stating this. It may have been constructed before other structures, but I'm not sure anything more definite can be stated. However, it has been awhile since I played the game.
  • Nope, removed the stuff about one of the first.
• Can the fact that gundarks are non-sentient be sourced to the game? Unless the game definitively states otherwise, they could easily be semi-sentient or non-sentient from the game's depiction.
  • Properly sourced.
• "At one of the Wookiee bases led by Chewbacca..." Is this a single base led by Chewbacca or one of many bases led by Chewbacca. Please clarify.
  • Better?
• Are the battle droid weapons stated to be E-5 blaster rifles in the game?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:55, August 12, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nope, therefore removed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:10, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 01:25, September 30, 2014 (UTC)

• I will not be continuing to take this article to status. Can an Inq please archive this. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 06:08, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
  • Same thing here. I'll keep my eyes on it. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:48, August 6, 2014 (UTC)