Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Sarn Shild

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Sarn Shild

• Nominated by: Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:05, May 9, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Barn-burner nom.

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Nice article. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:19, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:20, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
3. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:27, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
4. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:06, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
5. Cade Calrayn 20:16, August 2, 2013 (UTC)
6. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:11, August 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead

1. You should merge the two paragraphs of behind the scenes. The second one is too short.
   • Merged. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 19:22, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
2. I feel the last tow paragraphs of the biography could also be merged. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:04, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
   • One deals with the battle, the other with the aftermath. I think they're different enough to remain apart. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 19:22, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
     • There just both a bit short but I'll leave it up to you. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:20, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• Would it be applicable to add a succession box to the article, with Orgege? If the years (or some dating, at least) for Shild's term and Orgege's term are known, then it sounds like it would be appropriate. CC7567 ^(talk) 20:45, August 20, 2013 (UTC)
  • Added. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 19:36, August 21, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 21:11, August 21, 2013 (UTC)