Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Sarafur

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Sarafur

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 07:20, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Massive thanks to Dani for the image goodness.
  • Date Archived: 02:22, 28 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 2312 words (274 introduction, 1472 body, 566 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. Inqvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:46, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
  2. love me a BtS that skewers the scientific inconsistencies of the franchise Fan26 (Talk) 22:22, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
  3. Bonzane10 Sabine Starbird (holonet) 09:04, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Glad that there's a backup Ryloth. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:59, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 22:33, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:22, 28 November 2023 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • The page for Spice lord seems to be about the lords of a specific culture rather than the generic term, but I didn't want to remove the link in my copy-edit without confirming that the term in this article refers to the latter.
    • Expanded that article to account for the more generic usage as well.
  • Do you think Category:Mining planets would be applicable here? The Arcona occasionally mining salt doesn't sound like an established mining operation, so I wasn't sure about it myself. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:41, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Probably not, it really doesn't sound like your typical organized mining operations. Imperators II(Talk) 13:42, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Although I realise that listing authors isn't usually required when there's three, I'd say that it's worth listing them here since Fry and Wallace are responsible for almost all of the sources in the BTS bar SWTOR. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:09, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
    • I'd say that's a bit too arbitrary for my taste, plus I'm not super keen on that making for inconsistent presentation relative to all the other Moddell sector SAs from those Gamer articles.
  • The sentence "Certain astronomers theorized that Sarafur had become tidally locked so rapidly that the planet's sea that would eventually come to be known as the Krasho Salt Rifts had evaporated in as quickly as several years or even just months." reads weirdly to me. Would you be ok with me adding some mdashes around the mention of the Krasho Salt Rifts name to split it out a bit more clearly? Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:09, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • Amazing work on the article, and on handling the contradictions in particular. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:41, 21 October 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 02:22, 28 November 2023 (UTC)