Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Saaj Calician

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Saaj Calician

  • Nominated by: Jinzler (talk) 21:04, October 10, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A Knight Errant Sith

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:31, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote CC7567 (talk) 20:53, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 19:55, January 31, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Great job. I really enjoyed both the novel and this article. Menkooroo (talk) 03:11, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
  5. You can never get enough Knight Errant.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 17:54, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 19:10, February 11, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • "Calician learned the ways of the dark side of the Force and he studied the ways of the Sith" Double "ways of the". Try to avoid this type of repetition.
  • Article for Calician's writings about the dark side?
    • I've red-linked this for now; I'll create an article when I get back after Christmas and have access to my copy of the novel once again. --Jinzler (talk) 21:01, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
  • Seeing some linking issues.
    • Apologies, I should know better. I've now improved the linking. --Jinzler (talk) 21:01, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
  • This article could use a nice copyedit for grammar and spelling.
    • I've requested that Master Jonathan take a look it, as I think the article needs to be looked at by a fresh pair of eyes. I'll keep you updated as to how this goes. --Jinzler (talk) 21:01, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
      • I have the request and will handle it later this week when I'm not so busy. —MJ— Comlink 01:53, December 25, 2012 (UTC)
  • Is there a quote for Powers and abilities?
    • If I remember correctly, this is something that I gave some consideration to when I wrote-up the article. While there are plenty of quotes available for him, there are none that in any way relate to or allude to his powers or abilities, so I thought it best to leave the section quote-less, rather than to arbitrarily include an unrelated quote. --Jinzler (talk) 21:01, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
  • Will continue once these are done. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:51, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
    • I look forward to it, thanks for taking a look at the article. --Jinzler (talk) 21:01, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • "Hestobyll's reflecting pools": do these deserve an article?
    • I guess that depends on how far we stretch notability, as this would be a CAN-length article at best. I've added a red-link for now. --Jinzler (talk) 20:37, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
  • More for aesthetics, but I think the large P&T paragraph can be broken up somewhere.
  • Good work otherwise. CC7567 (talk) 18:46, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
    • Thanks for your copy-edit and review. --Jinzler (talk) 20:37, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • You repeat the phrase "perceiving the wider universe entirely through the Force" in both the intro and the body. Any chance you could mix it up a little?
  • The part about jornisae spiders in the beginning of the P&T needs some more context - why is it important? What does it show us about his personality?
  • Good work otherwise. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 18:58, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
  • Reload the infobox. At least the "mass" field is missing.
  • Article for the attack on Byllura? - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:39, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
    • A link to the Battle of Byllura article is already included in the second paragraph of the "Downfall" section. Essentially, Calician's encounter with Kerra Holt can be considered part of the wider battle. --Jinzler (talk) 19:35, February 7, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:07, February 11, 2013 (UTC)