Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ronto Wrap

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Ronto Wrap

  • Nominated by: Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 04:26, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Gotta love THR taking this one just over the word limit. And now 3 FANs going at once!
  • Date Archived: 06:15, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1041 words (159 introduction, 428 body, 454 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:GE WP:THR WP:ENT

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:36, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 01:49, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote LucaRoR (Talk) 05:52, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Supreme Emperor Holocomm 07:06, 23 February 2024 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:38, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
  6. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:14, 29 February 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • It would be more accurate to say the ship was patrolling the Stormwall rather than the Frontier since that's what they were actually doing. Lewisr (talk) 04:49, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
  • It's not really a leather pouch that Zyle wears, it's more of a custom leather longcoat that just has pockets. Lewisr (talk) 04:49, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
  • You should specify that Zyle was gathering the food to take with them to Valo. Lewisr (talk) 04:49, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
Luca
  • Great work! You just have a double [24] ref in the first "Non-canon stories" paragraph. Not sure if it's an oversight or if one of them is wrong. LucaRoR (Talk) 17:17, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
DFaceG
  • I feel that Remex being offered a wrap implies they are edible by Clawdites as well. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:32, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
    • I would disagree. People get offered plenty of food they can't eat in a market. Had he accepted it, I would be inclined to agree.
  • In a similar vein, the article body only explicitly states that ronto wraps are edible by humans while the infobox states they are edible by Artiodacs and Zabrak as well. The body never states that Zyle even consumes the ronto wraps, and for Strono, while he eats them we don't know he digests them. It might look like I'm suggesting the idea they're edible to those species be removed but I don't think it's an unreasonable assumption (why would Strono eat something he can't digest?); I merely think that, so we're as clear as possible, it should be explicitly stated just as it is with humans. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:35, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Regarding Zyle specifically, if we never see them or another Zabrak eat ronto wraps perhaps it is best to remove Zabrak from the list (unless they state an intent to consume them beyond just taking them). - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:36, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
      • Clearly stated Artiodacs in the Description. As for Zabraks, I believe it should stay, because my reading of the text in Escape from Valo is very much that Zyle is taking all the food they grab for themselves to eat. They're alone at that point and there would be no other reason for them to take them. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 17:47, 24 February 2024 (UTC)
Anil
  • Great work on this! I only have one nitpick: Shouldn't the February 27 D23 article be treated as the sole first mention? Those two SW.com articles were apparently released a day later, on February 28. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:03, 25 February 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 06:15, 29 February 2024 (UTC)