Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Quanto

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Quanto

  • Nominated by: —Tommy Dark side Master SWGTCG (Nine two eight one) 04:11, 27 February 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: In conjunction with the TOTJ resurgence movement.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Clean, as far as I can tell. Thefourdotelipsis 06:11, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Already felt the wrath of Grae on the GAN. Graestan(Talk) 01:23, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 14:27, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:09, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 20:38, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. Chack Attack:
    • Old Republic era is an OOU term. Please pick another phrase.
      • I was gonna just remove any reference to the time period at that point, but I changed it up a bit instead. see if that is satisfactory please.—Tommy Dark side Master SWGTCG (Nine two eight one) 13:21, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
    • "He was dishonest, evidenced when he lied to Andur Sunrider about how he acquired the coin purse of Sunrider's wife, Nomi." You mention this in P&T but don't explain in the body how he lied to Anudr, just that he stole the purse.
      • Addressed.
    • Also, "Fatal countdown", namely the first few sentences, is a bit PBP and reads a little choppy.
      • Addressed.
    • Chack Jadson (Talk) 01:38, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
      • Thanks to Joe Cool for the review. Please advise if anything further is required.—Tommy Dark side Master SWGTCG (Nine two eight one) 13:21, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
        • :) Chack Jadson (Talk) 20:38, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments

  • Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:38, 20 April 2009 (UTC)