- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Quaal Tavier Catharius
- Nominated by: AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:19, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I love Alliance Intelligence Reports.
(5 Inqs/0 User/4 Total)
Support
Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:26, 12 May 2008 (UTC)- Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:12, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
- Very well done. Chack Jadson (Talk) 00:54, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
Jaina Solo(Talk) 14:29, 24 May 2008 (UTC)- Graestan(Talk) 21:57, 24 May 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
Your era template doesn't match the infobox- Fized.
- Still doesn't match. :P I'd fix it for you, but I don't know what to source it with. At any rate, I know you'll get it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:26, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
- Hah hah. I got it. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:50, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
- Still doesn't match. :P I'd fix it for you, but I don't know what to source it with. At any rate, I know you'll get it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:26, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
- Fized.
Little intro context for the Order, please: "the m'Yalfor'ac Order"- I've added context later on in the intro, but I don't think its necessary for the opening sentence, and adding an explanation sort of mucks up the sentence.
- You're fine. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:26, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
- I've added context later on in the intro, but I don't think its necessary for the opening sentence, and adding an explanation sort of mucks up the sentence.
Your link to Espo Walker is a disambig page. Can you be more specific?- Fixed.
Brief descriptor for Mr. Cracken, please: " which eventually made its way to Airen Cracken"What lands? The way you transition this into the Rebellion being concerned about the Order makes it seem as though he had respect outside of just his planet. Please specify: "Respected and admired across the lands"Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:22, 10 May 2008 (UTC)- Better? -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:06, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
- Good. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:26, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
- Better? -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:06, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 21:57, 24 May 2008 (UTC)
- If anyone's wondering why I'm not calling him "Catharius," it's because "Tavier" is his family name. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:19, 3 May 2008 (UTC)