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Panno
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:36, 31 March 2022 (UTC)
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Support
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:56, 20 April 2022 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 04:55, 9 May 2022 (UTC) - Panno; no bread? ("Pan" is bread in Spanish) — Samonic
12:33, 9 May 2022 (UTC) - Remaining objections resolved via Discord. OOM 224 15:50, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:52, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
- TomotronStar Forge 13:52, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
- NanoLuukeCloning facility 14:10, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
- Almost used Template:EC lol nice work! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:25, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
Object
Macaroni
The name of the first subsection is super long, can you try something else?- Second section can definitely be split into two.
On the topic of that section - you've got three full paragraphs without a single mention of Panno. Is all of that detail really necessary?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:56, 12 April 2022 (UTC)- All addressed. With the paragraphs, just added Panno's name because that appearance involves all strike team. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:45, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
Can you specify what Stage 3 is referring to?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:36, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Let's see an image under "Attack on the shield generator and Alliance victory," maybe of the celebration.UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:22, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
- Added. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:35, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
OOM
If you follow the link to the Legacy Collection figure, you can see that the packaging features an illustration of Panno wearing a brown hooded cloak. This should be covered in tha article.Missing link/context for Han Solo.I don't see a need to specify the ship types of either the Home One or the Tydirium."a uniform similar in appearance to the Alliance Cold Weather armor sans headgear, gloves, and backpack. However, Panno's uniform differed from the Cold Weather armor through him wearing forest camouflage pants" — The first sentence goes into the differences between the clothing already, so the second sentence should be amended to accomodate that.The shooting location of the Home One scenes should be specified.OOM 224 15:04, 28 May 2022 (UTC)Images should be enlarged.Also, can you shorten those subheading titles? Unfortunately, half of the intro space is blank on default view.OOM 224 15:06, 28 May 2022 (UTC)- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:14, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
I think the image of the strike team needs to be replaced to something more directly relevant to Panno, perhaps an AT-ST since that section talks about his squad's actions, rather than an image relating to actions of another squad that Panno wasn't present for. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:25, 11 July 2022 (UTC)Celebration image should be replaced with one depicting Panno. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:25, 11 July 2022 (UTC)- Both done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:45, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
Looking at Chee's blog post, I think you can note this in the BTS eg "In 2006, Leland Chee theorized that Panno may be visible boarding the Tydirium. No Dresselians are seen boarding the shuttle, though there are a couple of hooded figures that may have been Panno." Only one I think is likely is the hooded figure immediately after Han, there's a figure visible under Han's arm once inside but I can't make out what it is. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:03, 11 July 2022 (UTC)- I already saw that blog post way before I was even close to nominating Panno, possibly even before I worked on Chiraneau, for reference of how long I remember seeing that post. That scene has the other Dressellian from the briefing, who's also seen in the celebration with Panno. I didn't feel like Leland Chee erroneously speculating Panno when it's duck tested as the other Dressellian is necessary to write about. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:34, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
- Upon Discord channel discussion, added text about that. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:49, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
- I already saw that blog post way before I was even close to nominating Panno, possibly even before I worked on Chiraneau, for reference of how long I remember seeing that post. That scene has the other Dressellian from the briefing, who's also seen in the celebration with Panno. I didn't feel like Leland Chee erroneously speculating Panno when it's duck tested as the other Dressellian is necessary to write about. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:34, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
Comments
- 1,040 words, and reduced since the initial nomination. Note to whomever reviews this article to check the word count, as I don't foresee it going down to under 1000, but still. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:20, 29 May 2022 (UTC)
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 12:32, 12 July 2022 (UTC)