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Oseon 6845
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 08:48, April 9, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: On this day thirteen years ago, I made my first main namespace edit on this article. A place never visited by Childish "Landonis" Gambino.
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- UberSoldat93
(talk) 10:22, April 25, 2020 (UTC) - QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 15:37, May 6, 2020 (UTC) - Fan26 (Talk) 21:32, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:41, May 31, 2020 (UTC)- Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 11:18, June 14, 2020 (UTC)
- As one of the earlier Star Wars books I read, I've always had a soft spot for it. Very nicely written. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:49, August 22, 2020 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:41, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
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Anil
Honestly, I'm not sure if plants kept in somebody's terrarium or estate should be listed under "Native flora" in the infobox. Is there any indication that they're actually "native"?- Removed. Imperators II(Talk) 07:51, May 31, 2020 (UTC)
"[…] members of a variety of other Humanoid and non-Human species." About the capitalization and hyphenating choices here, does the novel actually favor "Humanoid" and "non-Human"? My digital copy of The Lando Calrissian Adventures seems to go with "humanoid" and "nonhuman." Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:59, May 31, 2020 (UTC)
- Changed to what the source uses. Imperators II(Talk) 07:51, May 31, 2020 (UTC)
Toprawa
Slightly confused here. Is this intending to say plotting Gepta's downfall? Can we clarify this? "under the pretense of Mutdah's business rivals plotting his downfall."Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:35, October 19, 2020 (UTC)- Gepta made it look like Muttdah's arrest was arranged by Muttdah's rival, while in reality it was Gepta who arranged it. Does it look better now? Imperators II(Talk) 08:35, October 20, 2020 (UTC)
- I understand what you're saying now that you've explained it here, but the way the article is currently written makes it read like Gepta arrested him by telling him that it was because Mutdah's rivals were plotting Mutdah's downfall, which kind of doesn't make sense and is apparently not accurate anyways.
- I suppose I understand now what the problem was with the sentence and have tried to amend it. Imperators II(Talk) 05:19, October 21, 2020 (UTC)
- I understand what you're saying now that you've explained it here, but the way the article is currently written makes it read like Gepta arrested him by telling him that it was because Mutdah's rivals were plotting Mutdah's downfall, which kind of doesn't make sense and is apparently not accurate anyways.
- Gepta made it look like Muttdah's arrest was arranged by Muttdah's rival, while in reality it was Gepta who arranged it. Does it look better now? Imperators II(Talk) 08:35, October 20, 2020 (UTC)
It occurs to me that the cover here is apparently showing Oseon 6845, or at least its structures. The bulk of the story takes place there, yes? So that's obviously intending to show the buildings on Oseon 6845, which means you should find a way to use this image in the infobox.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:17, October 20, 2020 (UTC)- To be exact, the first half of the novel's chapters is set on 6845, and it's the only setting in the novel stated to have multiple buildings in close proximity to each other. Both are good points for your case, and I've added the image along with a note on the illustrator. Imperators II(Talk) 05:19, October 21, 2020 (UTC)
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Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 05:41, 23 October 2020 (UTC)