Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/O'reen

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O'reen

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Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:50, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:44, April 25, 2020 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 12:19, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:00, May 9, 2020 (UTC)
Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 14:38, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
Sounds like my kind of place. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:30, 1 November 2020 (UTC)
Tommy-Macaroni 20:59, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

~~Unless I've missed it somewhere, the body does not link to O'reenian (apart from the "Main article" link under the Inhabitants section), despite the term being used quite a few times.~~ Fan26 (Talk) 05:27, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
- Fixed. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:16, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

I'm confused by what this means. Traveled to their point of origin? Do you mean returning home to conclude their mission? Can we word this any differently? "After defeating the fighters, the group determined and traveled to their point of origin."
- Hopefully that's clearer. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:46, 1 November 2020 (UTC)
Also confused here. This makes it sound like they didn't know upfront that the data core is what they were after the whole time, which presumably isn't true. Can we reword this? "The individuals then identified the tactical data core as the item they were supposed to retrieve."
- Good point, thanks. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:48, 1 November 2020 (UTC)
~~No article for the station supervisor?~~ Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:49, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
- Already was linked from the article: Unidentified O'reenian military supervisor. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:33, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:59, 1 November 2020 (UTC)