Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mission to free Wookiee prisoners

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Mission to free Wookiee prisoners

(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. I love your work on the Canon articles! - AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 03:28, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Fantastic work on all the ghost missions! Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:02, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
  3. 501st dogma(talk) 17:25, February 10, 2015 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Since it's from the one Rebels episode I've watched... 💩 -- Darth Culator (Talk) 15:53, March 15, 2015 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 18:42, March 24, 2015 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote After IRC review--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 00:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 01:29, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • The Gozanti cruiser has been identified as Freighter 651 in the Droids in Distress chapter book. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:52, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • Spice mine K76 should be included in the infobox before Kessel. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:52, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • "where they found it was a damaged." something is missing here. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:52, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
    • Actually there was an extra word: "a" has been removed. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 05:57, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
  • A canon equivalent for Battle of Kashyyyk (19 BBY) needs to be created and linked since the take over of the Wookiee homeworld is mentioned in various sources. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:52, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
    • Do we have a source saying that that's actually the Imperial takeover of Kashyyyk? So far as I'm aware, we don't actually know what happens in the immediate aftermath of the battle from the Clone Wars. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 05:57, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
      • Looking back through the sources, you make a fair point. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:02, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
  • You link Tarkin and his title twice in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:52, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • "The Star Destroyer captured the Ghost, and Kallus and his stormtroopers prepared to board the Gozanti cruiser in order to confront the rebels." It might be worth clarifying here that the Ghost is still attached to the cruiser. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:52, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • Jabba needs to be linked to somewhere, although preferably in the body not the quote. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:52, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • LS-005 should be included in the infobox. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:52, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • " Wren painted her own personal symbol into the hangar floor" shouldn't this be onto? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:52, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
ew Rebels
  • Preliminary Objection: "Rescue mission on Kessel" is not an appropriate title for the article, as they are on the freighter and the Lawbringer as well. A title of "Mission to rescue Wookiees" or something would probably be better, though I can see arguments for actually splitting this article up into three different articles: Raid on Freighter 651, Rescue of Erza Bridger, and Rescue mission on Kessel. 501st dogma(talk) 20:11, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
  • For the command section of the infobox, Kallus' rank of Agent should go before his name.
  • Also, in the participants section, you should probably do the Wookiees like you did the stormtroopers, with Kitwar and Wulff indented under Multiple Wookiees for consistency.
  • "They chased him out of the city while being pursued by Imperial stormtroopers and TIE fighters. Bridger managed to escape the rebels but was nearly pinned down by a TIE fighter, which was shot down by the Ghost." Um, as three of the rebels are busy on the ground, is anyone piloting this thing? Is it on auto-pilot? :P
  • "Jarrus allowed Bridger to escape with the Ghost..." So Bridger stole the Ghost? If so, how do the rebels have the Ghost in Kallus' trap? Also, when does Bridger hook up with the Rebels?
  • Context for Alderaan in aftermath? 501st dogma(talk) 22:16, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
  • "When the Empire’s operations are targeted on an ongoing basis, it could signify something more than the left of a few crates." Um, I don't think left is the right word here :P
  • Context for Lothal in the Prelude.
    • It already said "planet." I've added "Outer Rim" before that. If you're looking for something else then please specify. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 06:20, February 3, 2015 (UTC)
      • I'm blind, disregard that. I was looking at a mention of Lothal later on in the prelude for some reason.
  • Mission to steal Imperial disruptors should probably be mentioned in the aftermath somewhere, as it is mentioned in the infobox. 501st dogma(talk) 01:56, February 3, 2015 (UTC)
    • Not sure I see the relevance beyond it happening afterward. The key part of that mission is the meeting with Bail Organa, which is already mentioned. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 06:20, February 3, 2015 (UTC)
      • Maybe pipelink attract in that sentence to the mission then? 501st dogma(talk) 13:20, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 01:29, March 25, 2015 (UTC)