Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mission to Brentaal IV

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Mission to Brentaal IV

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 23:25, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This was supposed to be a short GAN... Oh well.

(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Looking good. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:08, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 05:07, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 08:29, April 11, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 01:12, April 14, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:11, April 16, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:52, April 17, 2013 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote JangFett (Talk) 14:04, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • In the third paragraph of the mission section there's a spot where the word control is used three times fairly close together.
  • I also did a minor copy-edit which you should check out. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 09:25, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the copyedit and for looking it over. 501st dogma(talk) 21:48, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
  • Intro - article for the Alliance contact?
    • There you go.
  • Intro - what info was on the datadisc?
    • Added.
  • Article for the Imperial task force hunting the Far Orbit?
    • There.
  • You don't explicitly state that the wait died, just that he slumped and lost control. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 20:37, April 3, 2013 (UTC)
    • Done. Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma(talk) 22:30, April 3, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 14:04, April 18, 2013 (UTC)