Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Lita

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Lita

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 11:48, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Ketzalians seem interesting.

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. Was there really no existing Canon species that could have been used instead of creating a new one? Imperators II^(Talk) 15:23, March 7, 2020 (UTC)
2. Project Galaxy's Edge's very first FAN. :D MasterFredcerique 01:24, March 9, 2020 (UTC)
3. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:11, March 9, 2020 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:24, March 25, 2020 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:58, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
6. Nice work as always Spooky. Tommy Macaroni 20:05, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• "Jeet accepted, for a fee of one thousand credits, and tracked the pair ancient ruins at the edge of Black Spire Outpost." This sentence can be reworded to flow better.
  • Reworded.—spookywilloww^talk 20:46, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Gender is missing from the P&T and is currently intro and infobox-exclusive. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:55, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
  • Putting gender in P&T isn't a hard rule so long as the pronouns got linked, but added it anyways.—spookywilloww^talk 20:46, February 24, 2020 (UTC)

Imp

• "On the day of their arrival on Batuu, Lita and her crewmates were caught attempting to destroy Kat Saka's farm" — this seems intro-exclusive to me. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:16, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fiddled with the intro, should better reflect.—spookywilloww^talk 02:43, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
    • The fact that Saka's farm, and not just the ancient ruins, was located at the edge of Black Spire, seems intro-exclusive to me. Imperators II^(Talk) 23:15, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
      • True. Changed to apply that clause to the ruins to mirror the biography.—spookywilloww^talk 23:32, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Have you investigated a way to place the images at slightly more relevant locations in the article? I kind of feel like the second image's caption would be more fitting with the first image, and also the second image has nothing to do with the subsection it's currently in. Imperators II^(Talk) 23:37, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • If it'd work, I could move the map image down to "A bid to escape" with the caption from the second image, and include this image from Safwan's page for the "Mission at Kat Saka's farm" section? I suppose the main issue is that there's few relevant pictures to put, so I could also just remove the Saka one without replacing it.—spookywilloww^talk 23:43, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
    • The problem with the "A bid to escape" subsection is that none of our images really have much to do with the events described within. I'd just remove the Saka image. And probably just move the map image a paragraph lower, to where the action at the farm begins. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:00, March 7, 2020 (UTC)
      • Done.—spookywilloww^talk 15:20, March 7, 2020 (UTC)
        • Awesome. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:23, March 7, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:05, April 8, 2020 (UTC)