Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Leonia Tavira

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Leonia Tavira

  • Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:10, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: "So you take me for what I am—a psychopathic, schizophrenic, serial-killing femme fatale?"

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Nicely done. Menkooroo 17:32, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
  2. I love Imp girls! :D Plagueis327 05:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:31, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:48, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Quick sp/gr edit, and we're set Enochf 14:14, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
  6. —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:09, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
  7. Good work! Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 03:41, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Tavira
  • Should Zsinj's Empire and Greater Maldrood be added to the infobox's affiliation field? They're distinct factions from the Galactic Empire, and I've seen it done in other FAs like Teradoc.
    • Not sure, the sources are vague on how involved with them she was. I don't mind adding it if you want. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:38, April 19, 2012 (UTC)
      • If the sources don't make it clear how far her involvement with them goes, I'm good with them being left out. Your call. Menkooroo 23:48, April 21, 2012 (UTC)
  • I've added two redlinks to the intro.
  • Can we get the individual issue for the leading quote? Menkooroo 01:54, April 19, 2012 (UTC)
  • "she executed their leader and dispatched troopers to retrieve the body" --- is it Nrin's body they're after? The sentence reads as if it's the leader's body they're retrieving for her, which seems kind of strange if she personally executed him.
  • I've added a number of redlinks to the bio. I'm not sure if "bullion" requires an article , though, or if it's just another kind of credits. Do what you gotta do. Menkooroo 23:48, April 21, 2012 (UTC)
    • I think bullion is too generic a word to require an article. Created articles for all the comic ones and we're down to two. Green Tentacle (Talk) 01:45, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
      • Added one more to the bio. Don't shoot the messenger. ;)
        • By messenger I actually meant a ship rather than an individual. I've changed it to say that she sent a ship and removed the link. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:16, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
  • Some of "Downfall" reads somewhat as if it were from Corran's perspective --- after she leaves Courkrus, we're not told where she goes and we lose track of her until her hologram confronts the good guys. Can we find out that she's on the moon before we're told that she flees it? I think the hologram bit could use some tweaking to be more from her perspective, too.
  • Is "People's Liberation Army" an alternate name for the PLB? It shows up a few times in Personality and traits with "Army" capitalized, so I'm wondering.
    • Nope, that was me being stupid. Changed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:11, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
  • Third paragraph of P & t has ref [1] twice in a row. I'd sofixit, but I just want to confirm that it's all from the Handbook.
  • If the link I added to proton torpedo is incorrect, definitely change it, but keep in mind that torpedo is a disambiguation page. All from me. Great stuff. Menkooroo 03:10, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 13:20, June 5, 2012 (UTC)