Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/L'ulo L'ampar (Redux review)

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L'ulo L'ampar (Redux review)

• Redux comments: Reduxed per Meeting 141.
• Date added: September 20, 2022

(+4) (Inquisitorius votes only)

Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:55, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
2. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:52, 27 May 2023 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 22:17, 4 June 2023 (UTC)
4. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:17, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• Update still pending. UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:05, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Pending no longer. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 13:54, 8 October 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• Pronouns update needed for the infobox Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:07, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Updated.—spookywilloww^talk 01:30, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
• I haven't got access to Timelines but can any of the date notes be made more concise through using it? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:24, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
• The First Order should be contextualized as the successor to the Empire. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:31, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Cleaned up the date notes and added context. OOM 224 (he/him) 14:31, 12 May 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Context for Sterdic IV. (Note to self: continue from Black Squadron.) JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:14, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Added.—spookywilloww^talk 20:30, 22 May 2023 (UTC)

Thrawn

• From the Poe Dameron 13 page, it looks like the dating can be specified more. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 23:35, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
  • It makes no difference here as we still come to the conclusion that L'ulo died by 34 ABY. OOM 224 (he/him) 01:03, 27 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Leaving a note for paper trail's sake that this should be cleared up now per the below objection, as it now ties into the death note and worked into the body.—spookywilloww^talk 20:29, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• Yavin 4 should be contextualized, likely as a moon to be consistent with intro.
• His death occurring in 34 ABY is only mentioned in the infobox/intro, year is missing from biography.—spookywilloww^talk 16:52, 4 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Both added OOM 224 (he/him) 17:24, 4 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Note: Up to Battle of Endor Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:20, 26 April 2023 (UTC)