- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Kina Margath
- Nominated by: Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 23:41, April 5, 2013 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Because when Cade gets grumpy at new FANs, I just keep going.
(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:14, April 12, 2013 (UTC)- I categorically object to the adjective grumpy. Cade
Calrayn 00:16, May 2, 2013 (UTC) - Trip391 (talk) 03:41, August 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:22, August 27, 2013 (UTC)
- CC7567 (talk) 23:05, September 8, 2013 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:24, September 8, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Floyd
"complex into a thriving success with a galaxy-wide reputation employing over 1,500 full-time and around 4,500 part-time workers." What kind of reputation? This info is present in the intro but not here.- Added.
What do you mean by orphaned operatives? I'm imagining a bunch of Oliver Twists with blasters.- Context added, but I enjoyed that visual a lot more than the reality.
"Margath enjoyed the notion of allowing Alliance operatives to use her businesses as safehouses as long as they attracted no Imperial attention." Did she simply enjoy the notion, or actually carry it out?IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:01, April 8, 2013 (UTC)- Clarified. Thanks for the review. - Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 13:35, April 10, 2013 (UTC)
- Clarified. Thanks for the review. - Sir Cavalier of One
Green Tentacle
"…first outwitting the Tombat to obtain the jewels in the first place." That reads funny with the two firsts. Green Tentacle (Talk) 16:16, August 25, 2013 (UTC)- Removed the first first. - Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 08:59, August 27, 2013 (UTC)
- Removed the first first. - Sir Cavalier of One
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 23:26, September 8, 2013 (UTC)