Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ki Sazen

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Ki Sazen

  • Nominated by: Haul Jets
  • Nomination comments: I worked hard to pull together all of the information given about Sazen throughout the quests involving her, both dark side and light side.

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Support

Object

  • I appreciate your enthusiasm and welcome you to the FAN, but this article needs quite a bit of work before it's Featured. However, it's not bad for a beginner.
  • The sectioning has some issues. The biography is over-sectioned; there doesn't need to be quite so many subsections, and the capitalization of the other sections is off—please see the Layout Guide.
  • If you're not already, I'd suggest switching to the Monobook skin, which will show you the redirects that are throughout your article—they'll be highlighted in orange.
  • I have access to the text files for the game, so I'll peruse them for missing info.
  • Sazen's Master seems article-worthy.
  • The article's missing context on a number of things; in the intro, there's Taris, Cold War, Galactic War (i.e. who was fighting), for starters.
  • There's a serious lack of linking—Jedi Order in the intro, planet, homeworld and Nikto in the first few sentences of the Biography.
  • Also, with the subsectioning issues, I'd suggest combining a lot of your paragraphs—they're pretty short. For example, everything under "Apprenticeship" should be just one paragraph, along with the first few sentences of the next section.
  • Please reload your infobox; if you don't know what that means, I need you to re-add the Dark Jedi infobox using the dropdown in the edit window, and move the info from the current infobox to the new one. That'll make sure that every field is there and in the correct order, even if they're empty, and that'll make the Category:Infoboxes with missing parameters go away.
  • I'll be back with more once you take care of this stuff. Good luck, and welcome. Always good to see a new TOR fan. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 17:40, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

  • Noted all of the above. I'm deleting the recommendation, and will do my best to move this up to a desirable level of quality as time permits. -Haul Jets
    • Are you sure? I can formally archive it, or you could leave it here and work on the objections as they're posted; it's up to you. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:30, March 7, 2015 (UTC)
      • I'm sure. I didn't realize how far off I was when I made the nomination. I've copied the objections down; thank you for writing them out for me. If and when I manage to get the article to a better standard of quality, I will consider trying again. —Unsigned comment by Haul Jets (talk • contribs)

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

  1. Inqvote So this never got archived back in 2015. Imperators II(Talk) 10:35, September 25, 2017 (UTC)