Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Kharrus/Legends

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Kharrus

• Nominated by: CC7567 ^(talk) 21:50, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Jones.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 00:31, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
2. Cade Calrayn 15:36, May 18, 2013 (UTC)
3. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:28, July 24, 2013 (UTC)
4. And take back one kadam to honor the Hebrew God whose Ark this is. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:11, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
5. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 12:45, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa

• Does "Chancellor" need to be capitalized here? I'm not sure if this is one of those titles that is always capitalized: "...when the Chancellor received a transmission from Jabba."
  • I honestly have no clue—"Supreme Chancellor" is always capitalized that way, but I don't believe there's a canonical precedent when it's abbreviated to "Chancellor." What would you recommend?
    • A workaround solution is to just say "Supreme Chancellor" and avoid the uncertainty. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:03, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
      • That's was I was considering; it's been adjusted throughout the article. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:07, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
• If Falso is Hondo's only lieutenant, which seems to be the case, this sentence needs a comma before "Turk." I wasn't sure about the accuracy of that: "overseen by Ohnaka's duplicitous lieutenant Turk Falso" Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:54, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Thanks for the review. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:01, September 13, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 12:45, September 14, 2013 (UTC)